5th one...

Jan 14, 2006 14:31

So. Here I am again^^

The third of this plotline and more is coming, or then maybe not^^
If you haven't read the earlier chapters here's the links.

Suspicious Mind
Another Try

Title: The Black Monster
Author: pi_ankh
Theme: 31. Monster
Rating: PG (Contains swearing…)
Pairing: Gackt x Die
Disclaimer: I do not own these people. This story ( Read more... )

other::gacktxdie, theme a31::monster

Leave a comment

Comments 16

acu_saree January 14 2006, 13:35:44 UTC
ee... how evil is Gackt ne... poor Die...

Reply

pi_ankh January 14 2006, 18:51:23 UTC
He really is pure evil... I feel sorry for Die too );
Thanks for reading xD

Reply


kylai January 14 2006, 14:26:24 UTC
*hugs* Thanks for this great chapter!!!
Another work of you which will charm me. Your writing is just wonderful.
"I don’t want to hit him anymore, but I have to. I have to, because of our love." -> I just love sentences like this.
Please don`t let us wait for another chapter too long.^^

Reply

pi_ankh January 14 2006, 18:47:25 UTC
I love to be poetic like that. (Well, it's not that poetic...) My teachers complained when I made sentenses like that at school 'cause it's not correct if you think about the grammar^^

The next chapter is written by my friend and it depends on her when I'll put the next one here^^ It might take a while... now she's gonna kill me for saying that xD

Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it^^

Reply


stoicdecadence January 16 2006, 05:53:57 UTC
Theyre so lovely *O* So ....sad yes but lovely either way XD;;;

Reply

pi_ankh January 16 2006, 09:21:04 UTC
Lovely? Well, if you say so... (I think it is quite tragic, Gackt nearly killing Die...) And it is really sad.

There will be another chapter... (I'm stuck or something like that^^) Hope you'll read that one too^^

Thanks for commenting again!

Reply


seinen_no January 16 2006, 12:08:06 UTC
Ok, if I only I could get my hands on this Gackt and slowly strangle him to death! Why the fuck doesn't Die try to defend himself, if not beating back?
I hope this ends the vicious circle (I forbid any more Sentenced for you to listen to, or I will torture you with something really really mean ... like Kinki Kids XD) of yours. You really need to lighten up or I will lose the rest of sympathy for your Gackt that I have left ^^
Still lover your style and Gackt's thoughts were very well explained. Thanks ne!

Reply

pi_ankh January 16 2006, 17:56:01 UTC
I can't live without Sentenced! "I'll kill myself" *sings along*... Their songs are so inspiring and I love them to death!
The story goes on... With two chapters... *evil grin* But really... I'm getting over with my angst phase... Something very niceee is coming up... But not before I'm done with this one ^^
And why doesn't Die defend himself? Well, he still loves that bastard (or at least that is my opinion and of course I'm right *selfish bastard*). And I think he is in shock for being so brutally beaten...
And even if Gackt is a total asshole, I have some symphaty left for him. He does understand that he is an idiot...
Thanks for reading this one too <3

Reply

seinen_no January 16 2006, 18:53:46 UTC
but that's what these guys, who beat up their girlfriends/boyfriends, always say .. that they regret it. 2 more? gods, you're killing me! Listen more to Die Ärzte, this will lighten you up for some fluff that should follow after 5 angsty fics.
I'm still looking forward to every story of yours anyways (suffers together with Die).

Reply

pi_ankh January 17 2006, 10:38:50 UTC
Well it continues with three chaps from here if you count the one fonulyn writes^^ (Or wrote... I think you have read it allready^^)
And I did listen to Die Ärzte and I liked it^^ Their songs can be really odd in times. (And after Die Ärzte I listened some Sentenced again... *can't help myself*)
My angst phase is slowly passing. I have these two angst (or they are atleast a bit sad) and then you will me smashed with a lemon... (Can I even say smashed with?)

Reply


hysteric_moon January 17 2006, 06:20:21 UTC
I enjoyed this (if enjoy is the right word to use about poor Die getting a beating!) again it was beautifully written, I hope I won't have too long to wait for the next part.

Reply

pi_ankh January 17 2006, 10:41:19 UTC
Thank you <3
Your comments make me so happy... Well Hyper, actually...
The next part is on paper, but I will get it in here maybe today^^ Depends how many typos I manage to do^^

Reply

hysteric_moon January 17 2006, 10:59:37 UTC
I'm glad, I am useful for something YAY!! I never know what to say when I comment and end up repeating myself or waffling on LOL! My comments are rubbish! I do mean what I say though.

Anyway I can't wait for the next part I'll keep looking out for it!

VERY nice icon by the way!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up