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From Great Heights - #46, summer - 1/5

Oct 12, 2008 13:49

Title: From Great Heights
Author: jibunnohana
Theme: #46, summer
Rating: R
Pairing: Ni~ya x Sakito
Band[s]: Nightmare
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Comments: Short. X3

( Part 1 )

nightmare::ni~yaxsakito, theme a46::summer

Comments 16

bauci October 12 2008, 19:06:20 UTC

Oh wow.
What an opening and it's just... you do the smut and you do it so well, it's everything I could possibly want, like it usually is with your fics, but I didn't know you could do SMUT like that too, you have no more excuses for dodging that now hon, must be included more often and I should probably put a period somewhere XD .

The mood is good, expert on blowjobs!Niya is better and the last paragraph leaves a promise of more nice confusing emotions to come.

Well done ♥!

jibunnohana October 13 2008, 15:36:45 UTC

I don't particularly like writing smut when it's the main point, but if it's plot that's different. (That isn't to say I don't like reading PWPs...) There will be lots more in this fic, one scene for each part. XD

Thank you for reviewing, as always! ♥

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jibunnohana October 13 2008, 15:37:10 UTC

Thank you~

jea_chan October 12 2008, 19:54:22 UTC

You go straight to the point from the beginning!!
I liked it!Sakito acting like it was nothing, while it's always something, but he never wants to tell, as always!
Next chapter soon please XD?

jibunnohana October 13 2008, 15:38:31 UTC

Thought I'd try something a little different. XD Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! ♥

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jibunnohana October 13 2008, 15:38:50 UTC

Thank you~ I'll post more soon. :3

narcolepticnemu October 13 2008, 00:00:25 UTC

Oooo I like....this is looking very promising. Can't wait for more~

jibunnohana October 13 2008, 15:39:10 UTC

Thanks for reading~ ♥ I'll have more up soon. :3