Inside and Out - #16, Denial - Chapter 4

[jibunnohana]

Title: Inside and Out
Author: jibunnohana
Theme: #16, denial
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ni~ya x Sakito
Band[s]: Nightmare
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Comments: I'd like to draw everyone's attention to a hot little companion piece to chapter 3 written by josietries. It can be found here, in this thread. Please check it out! :3

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

Comments

[bauci]

♥!
Oh. Good job with showing Sakito's character. Niya's thoughts are very easy to follow and his feelings come across well. I can feel them myself XD I think what shone most brightly were the rejection letter and then Sakito clutching the tape.

Sakito's really unwilling to let him go. I'm surprised at his boldness but then again, maybe not. If he makes his mind up about something then... ^^ He's so adorable here :3

Wah. I'm so happy to read this, totally gave a positive start to my day. Thank you for writing and sharing ♥!

[jibunnohana]

Originally I was going to have something else happen instead of the college rejection letters, but in the end it worked much better this way. Sakito is a strange creature - he's a little bit passively possessive, I think. And he does think Niya has potential, so he wants him to stay for that too, he just doesn't know how to say so. XD *pat him*

I'm glad you enjoyed it~ ♥ (Hope you get some comments on your bit as well! :3)

[bauci]

Lol, passively possessive, I like that XD You do realize that this only makes me want to read the next part more and more.
(you know your´s is only one that matters :3)

[jibunnohana]

And I always say I'll try to get it done sooner, and the it ends up being a month anyway.... *hides* >>;

(But still~ *die*)

[harlequinn_coy]

Yay, update! I like how they kind of smoothed over the practise thing without ever really...smoothing it over. lol.

[jibunnohana]

Sakito is sneaky like that? XD
Thanks for reading! <3

[n3uromanc3r]

I like Sakito's determination to keep Ni~ya in the band! And this sudden invitation! It seems he recognized finally how to "handle" Ni~ya, and shamelessly uses his new knowledge!

[jibunnohana]

He is being a little shameless, in that sense. But it's really because he wants to be friends~ Thanks for reading! :3

[jea_chan]

Finally the 4th chapter!!This story is always so exiciting to read!
I like the scene in Sakito's room and the contagious Star Wars fan he is.The rejection letters were really a good idea, the way Niya softens his feelings.
and the piece of chapter 3 written by josietries lighted in my mind the word "hot" XD

well well I like how this story proceeds!

[jibunnohana]

He is such a little geek, Niya loves it. 83 I'm glad you enjoyed reading! ♥

[ahmtal]

to be honest with you, i didn't like your fikku very much at first: i was hooked by the prologue, but some parts of the first chapter especially the sakito's teasing and i thought it would be another classic nauseatingly sweet niyaxsaki fikku. ok, that sound harsh, but it doesn't sound that mean in french - yeah, i admit french is my mother-tongue language - and i just couldn't find a proper way to explain this in english

[jibunnohana]

Well, I'm glad you did enjoy it on the second try~! X3 I don't believe I would be able to write this with a coauthor because it is for a challenge, but I will let josietries know that you enjoyed her part.