#12 candle - nisaki - part three

[jibunnohana]

Title: Vanilla Moon
Author: jibunnohana
Theme: #12 Candle
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ni~yaxSakito (Nightmare)
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Comments: AU, very loosely based on the movie Bell, Book & Candle. I've had this done for a while, but no time to type it up. Sorry for the wait. X3;

Part 1
Part 2

Comments

[izon_no_niwa]

Ooooh, now a reference to 'vanilla moon'... It sounds tasty.

And duh, how was it that Ni~ya looks so smitten about a man named Sakito and then just blurt out he's got a fiancee? *coughchokedie* Makes me want to hit him. Then what? So Sakito can go be jealous and stuff? O__O I'm really gonna stick to the 'apothecary'... @_@

[jibunnohana]

It does sound tasty! Like a...type of ice cream or something. XD Poor Niya, he doesn't know what he's saying. *tut*

I'm rambling, but it's from the heart XD

[bauci]

Hm, I should probably start watching this community, because I keep missing your updates otherwise :p

As for this chapter. Ah, Niya really seems to be under some sort of spell. Sakito on the other hand is much harder to figure out- does he enjoy Niyas advances? If not, what are his motives for allowing the others presence...

Damnit, I've always disliked reviews that ponder on things that are happening in the fic, but fail to give more, erm substantial feedback. I apologize for that. The story really is very interesting and as I've mentioned before- your writings are always a pleasure to read. I haven't really been commenting, but I've read all your Niya/Sakito fics (or at least the ones that are listed in your journal) and they are absolutely gorgeous. You are a wonderful writer.

I could go on, but I don't want to freak you out XD

Anyway, I'm looking forward for another chapter. Thank you for writing and sharing! ♥

Re: I'm rambling, but it's from the heart XD

[jibunnohana]

In the way of updates, I do eventually post all my 50stories themes on the NiSaki comm when they are finished. Don't worry about what sort of comments, I'm happy to have any at all! :D; And I really appreciate the compliments, and am glad you are enjoying my fics. ♥

Re: I'm rambling, but it's from the heart XD

[bauci]

Of course I am.
(youaretotallymyfavouriteauthor)
Wah, I should really stop. It's just that I've liked your stories for so long but only now got the courage to actually try to review. Ah, I feel like a fool. Right, I will be back with another incoherent comment the next time you update!
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[my_zero]

“Well, my family is rich, there’s no need to work.” As he spoke, Niya thought the words he’d used so often to impress others sounded as empty and pointless as his life truly was. In a last ditch attempt to make up for it, he added, “I went to the local university for a while.” As if that would impress anyone, Niya thought ruefully.

Now that reminded me a whole lot of Nick Hornby's 'About A Boy'. I loved that book and always found the scene where he meets this special woman and discovers that he's just a shallow guy with no depth whatsoever one of the best parts of the whole book. I'm glad I'm given a chance to reread this part with Ni~ya being that shallow guy. :D I always had pity on him. :DD

[jibunnohana]

Oooh, really? I've never read that book, but maybe I will now! :3