Don't caress my body with these dirty fingers

[50past12]

Don't caress my body with these dirty fingers
Pairing: Sakurai Sho/Ninomiya Kazunari; mentioning of Sakurai Sho/Matsumoto Jun
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: BL, angst, Nino's P.O.V, Sho "using" Nino
Disclaimer: I do not own them.
Summary: Nino shouldn't sleep with Sho. He knows that. But he just can't help... Nino doesn't like the way Sho touches him

Comments

[sharmidev]

i'm lost. sho really is cheating on nino with matsujun? and nino will continue his relationship with sho even knowing that? is that it? well either way i think this could be an amazing start to a multi-chapter thing or something.

[50past12]

Well, Sho is just with Nino because of sex, but who he really likes is Jun. Nino knows that and wants to solve this because he's a good friend and doesn't what to see Sho living a lie with him. So in the end Nino declares he doesn't want to continue that "relationship" he had with Sho, just continue as good friends.

I tried to explain in the best way, but I'm not good with words and English isn't my language so it might be a bit confusing (^^")

And... it was supposed to be a secret, but I wrote a new better version for this fic. It became the way I first wanted, wrote in first person (completely in Nino's P.O.V).
I will post that other version after "Coloring your life~" is done.

Anyway, thank you for reading this old fic (^^)

[sharmidev]

i just reread the story and i can see more of your ideas. maybe my first read was just bad. but no your english is amazing you shouldn't worry at all.

p.s.i shall be looking forward to the new/better version of this story! but i still like the way you wrote this one it sorta leaves the reader with lots of questions to ponder.

2nd p.s.Also love the way nino never hates sho. shows arashi love.

[50past12]

I think is better if read listening to "Gimmick Game", gives a little bit of the ideas of the plot since it was inspired in the lyrics :D

The other version I shall post the end of this week or so...