That's the way the story goes...

Feb 20, 2008 17:25

Chapters 3-5 are here! Yay! This was a short one. But good things come in small packages. : )

For all intents and purposes this story is now called

Beautiful Girl

Chapter 3: It’s driving me mad…

George sank into the nearest chair, debating whether he should go back to bed. He wasn’t really sick, just extremely tired. Maybe, his throat was ( Read more... )

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cholera_jasna February 20 2008, 22:59:39 UTC
Aaawww, too short. But lovely! I really like it, even if it ends too soon.
So how about another one? xD

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4you_blue_jway February 20 2008, 23:04:20 UTC
(lolz.) Thanks.
Nothing in the works just yet as I pretty much just finished this one yesterday. Always looking for new ideas though. :)

(Maybe a couple pages on the muffin fiasco? hmm...perhaps. lol)

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atawia February 21 2008, 17:08:24 UTC
LOL, I love your icon XD!

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4you_blue_jway February 22 2008, 03:32:17 UTC
Thanks! One of my favs too.
I just wish I knew more about it! lol.
Like what kind of muffin it was... I'm thinking blueberry...

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baggins0716 February 20 2008, 23:29:28 UTC
Aw. It was really short. But adorable all the same. :D

I think the Louise thing worked well. George's last words make me laugh. ;) Any road, yeah, I loved every minute of it. :)

More stories would be awesome. Definitely.

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4you_blue_jway February 20 2008, 23:56:25 UTC
Yeah, I sort of just ran out of things to say and didn't want to go into too much detail if you know what I mean.

And it seemed like something my brother would say to me in the same circumstances...lol. idk.

Thanks. And as I've said before, I'm always looking for new ideas. :)

(And can I just say I think it's totally awesome you said anyroad & I realize how dorky I sound telling you that. lol)

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isat_belonely February 21 2008, 01:43:04 UTC
THAT WAS SO MUCH CUTER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE.

And, trust me, I thought it was going to be cute. ;)

Awww.

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4you_blue_jway February 21 2008, 02:08:05 UTC
Yay! Cuteness is always good. Thanks! :D
(You're icon IS cute btw.)

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atawia February 21 2008, 17:07:38 UTC
Awwwwww, that was so sweet! Too bad it was so short but still, a really cute little story :]. I liked the way they were both so shy to eachother. Well done :D!

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4you_blue_jway February 22 2008, 03:16:40 UTC
Thanks! I felt the shyness was a key point although she seemed really confident in the beginning. But George seems the type not to be too forward (he's cutely clever like signing his autograph with 7 kisses, which he did for Pattie).

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kiedis_amore June 28 2008, 15:09:56 UTC
Awwww I loved this!! I really love your writing :D

And yay for late comments xD

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4you_blue_jway June 29 2008, 00:05:57 UTC
Yeah, it was just a little idea but one of my favs definitely. =)

Better late than never! =D

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