Key Party Fic: ill communication

[4jinx_removing]

Title: Ill Communication
Pairing: Guti/Mesut Özil
Rating: NC-17
Words: 1632
Summary: Mesut is shy and nervous, but you know Guti can handle anything.
Disclaimer: Not true.
A/N: Written for Big Brother Key Party

Comments

Translation application

[tiny_zhi]

This is really a good article though Guti and Ozil isn't a very famous pair.But because of differentlanguages,such a great article can't be read by more people especially Chinese people.
So can I translate your article into Chinese and put it on a Chinese webpage?All your rights will be kept.After finiching translating it,I'll send the URL of your article's translation at once.Or if you don't want your article to be translated,I'll respect your choice.
Thanks.I'm waiting for your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Zhi

Re: Translation application

[4jinx_removing]

Thanks for reading. That's a really nice offer, but I'd prefer my writing not to be published anywhere but in Live Journal, due to privacy issues. No, thank you. (:

Re: Translation application

[tiny_zhi]

OK.Thanks.
You are really a good writer.

Re: Translation application

[4jinx_removing]

thank you *h*

[inesdelsol]

mai gawd

“So, let me get this straight...I go off to Turkey and can’t speak English, German, or Turkish, and Perez buys a German Turk who can’t speak Spanish? We’re living in some fucking parallel universe, I tell you….” Guti said, in a solid stream of Spanish, that had the meek midfielder shrugging and blushing even more.

*gasps*

Those lines dragged me into your fic and put me on my back. I adore this pairing now, I just... It's Guti in his glory. And even Sergio is there. Of course. I'm sure he already fucked Mesula :P

Awesome job, chica! I adore your writing may I worship you? <333

[4jinx_removing]

It's all Guti, he gets in my brain and I just type this stuff. LOL.

Hahaha, yes, you know Sergio has already tested the merchandise.

Awww, you're too sweet. *k*

[4jinx_removing]

Thank you!

Yeah, IDK what Silva will do. You know how he always wants to top.

[4jinx_removing]

This is the third time I've gotten him at Key Party and I haven't hurt him yet. Passing out and waking up with Pique is traumatic enough...

[nanousblues]

RAWR GUTI!
And this hot little piece of ass that is Mesut! Lecker!
I love your writing.

[4jinx_removing]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked.
Oh, God, Mesut...I think he's my new favorite tart.

[karneol_vision]

Aw! No seriously, this may be hot as fuck - and I mean of course it IS! - but what makes me love it is how damn bloody sweet it is.

“Sergio es mi guapo capitán,” Mesut said.
God xD Fuck, AW... I can't even say how much the troublesome conversation, embarrassed Mesut and slightly exasperated Guti have tugged at my heart.

I really like the ending, how a mutual lack of understanding can be sort of a blessing, too.

And I agree with what I've seen while scrolling past the other comments, your Guti is an awesomely living and astounding character.

[4jinx_removing]

oooh, thank you, bb. *k*

Guti is just one of those great "characters" who has no boundaries in my mind. He can be endearing in one moment and difficult in another, but he's always being Guti.