Sexual Orientation: Part Two

[4jinx_removing]

Title: Sexual Orientation: Part Two
Rating: NC-17(for pure filth)
Pairings: Guti/Sergio Canales/Iker Casillas/Raul Gonzalez/Sergio Ramos/Cristiano Ronaldo(various combinations) Appearances by: Higuain, Garay, Gago, and Granero.
Words:3800
Disclaimer: Not true.
Summary: Ramos and Ronaldo return. Guti and Canales get closer, as the party gets out of

Comments

[katiebooth1983]

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Ive got nothing!

Wow, um, yeah.

<3

[4jinx_removing]

Ahahaha! Yeah, these boys have that affect on my brain, too.

[lolatweeti]

I can't even deal.

Just OMFG this is sinfully delicious.

I guess what I'm trying to say is lkjagy;khsdajh. Ya know?

[4jinx_removing]

Thank you! So glad you liked it. (:

[miss_black91]

OMFG. Just OMFG.

It's all I can say.

[4jinx_removing]

Oh, I'm glad you enjoyed it. (:
Thanks!

[lovinthelads]

Oh boy oh boy....

Okay *clears throat*

so firstly, this is the best thing I've read since I don't even know when. The way you went into Guti's head is what I think makes this work. I think someone else commented that when you get too many footballers in one bed, you lose track of who's cock is where, but when Guti is telling it- he loses track too, and that so works.

I love the contrast of the bitter sweet thoughts of Guti about how much longer this all was going to last for him with the new kid, ready to take on the reigns of all this debauchery.

*sigh*

Loved it!

X

[4jinx_removing]

Wow, thank you! I'm really glad you loved it. I had some serious doubts along the way, so I appreciate this comment so much.

Everything I write has its own voice, but this one was very distinct to me. I don't think I ever really had complete control of this story, at any point. I've written lots of group sex, but this was the first football fic. They're actually a little easier than original characters, I think!

p.s OMFG Captain Guti starting, thank you, Jesus!!!!!!

[lovinthelads]

Guti runs my brain sometimes too...he's like that.

if the commentators do NOT stop talking about Guti leaving I am going to burst into tears!

X

[4jinx_removing]

I know, when they were saying it was a good arrangement for everyone, I'm like, "Speak for yourselves, bitches!"

[lunar_art]

Oh dear god.
more of this please.

[4jinx_removing]

Thank you!

I know, I want more toooo...I honestly could've written every single aspect and pairing, but I didn't think people would read a 50k length orgy, LOL.

[lunar_art]

Oh think again honey. Especially Gonzalo. I can't tell you how much I would LOVE people to start writing him. Especially with Sergio.

And introducing mini Sergio was brilliant. I should have put that in the original comment but brain capacity was at a minimum after reading this.

It really was good so I say again, more please.

[4jinx_removing]

I agree, there's not enough Gonzalo at all. I've been itching to write an Argentine barbecue that turns to drunken debauchery. There need to be more hours in the day, because I have too many ideas!

Thanks so much. I was dying to write Mini Sergio, but when I saw Raul put his arm around him after the match, I about peed myself. (: