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mmouse15 October 17 2009, 17:43:54 UTC
*whew*

Do you really think it's a weak ending? I don't. Seems like such an intense overload would really drain everyone's energy, and 'Hide staying semi-alert to watch over Ratchet and 'Jack is very IC. Wraps things up nicely.

The holo!smexings were very, very hot and sexah. Yum!

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__wilderness__ October 17 2009, 22:40:22 UTC
Uh guh... concrit will be a little late in coming... need a cold shower after all that...

Goodgod, I do adore the way you write those three together!

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quidamling October 17 2009, 23:01:34 UTC
Guh, this is amazing. Love the Ratchet sammich and it manages to be so tender. <3 danke for finishing.

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