Breath Tied; Stein/Spirit; Table 1; 16 Voice

[kkscatnip]

Title: Breath Tied
Author: kkscatnip
Pairing/Rating: Stein/Spirit, R-18
Warnings: Breathplay, D/s, exhibitionism (kinda)
Theme: #16, Voice (Table 1)
Disclaimer: They not be blonging to me :(
A/N: A very wholehearted thank-you to widowblade for performing thorough beta duties. This fic would be much less awesome if not for him.

Comments

[ryu_no_yuki]

Omg I couldn't have laughed more at the last two bits of dialogue! XDD

I think it's really...hot, for lack of better word, that they experimented like that. It's just in Stein's nature to try something new, and poor little Spirit can't help but to be dragged along. <3

Or maybe I'm just fangirling over this too much. XD

<3

[kkscatnip]

Thankyouthankyou *_* I am so glad you liked.

For a story by me, it has very little dialogue >D;; *loves to write people talking* So I'm glad you enjoyed the little bit of it that there is!

Haha, I don't think that's the first time Stein's tried that. The first time with Spirit, yes, but not the first time generally. He'd want to make sure he knew what he was doing first with something like that, that could endanger Spirit's life hahaha IMAGINE EXPLAINING THAT TO SHINIGAMI-SAMA. Still, experimenting is fun *_*

Feel free to fangirl all you want. God knows I fangirl this pairing far too much +_+

e-edited for FAIL HTML ._.

[nenena]

Guh. This is so perfect. Ridiculously hot, of course. My god, you write amazing sex scenes!

[kkscatnip]

Haaaaa, thanks! *twirls you* I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I suppose if I'm going to write nothing but sex, it's virtuous that I write it well ^^;;;;

[pkempa]

Not bad. Actually, really freakin' hot. X3;
You are making me like this pairing more and more.

I agree that you do write sex scenes well.

[kkscatnip]

I am happy you like :D Thank you so much for commenting.

There can never be enough Spirit/Stein love. I don't care that it's the yaoi pairing you see the most in both English and Japanese fandom. There's never enough +_+

Thank you, again! I like to write sex, so... yes. ♥

[ilikebigtoes]

omg...

You make writing smut look so easy because you write it so well D: Chair bondage is sadly a weakness of mine and his tie as a collar?

♥

(I leave such lame comments)

[kkscatnip]

I... really love writing smut, so. Heh.

Collars/possession/bondage/etc... oh, yeah, I'm all over that shit.

Thank you, thank you. It pleases me to please you :D

(You leave comments. Trust me when I say that lameness is not a factor.)

[squigglymello]

I held my breath while reading that. I was so easily sucked into that, and I want to blame it on the fact I cosplay Spirit. But, I won't, but I did find myself wanting to breathe and just go "Gaaaah, hot <3" But I couldn't. You always seem to just...

Put bondage restraints on my feet and drag me away. Yeah, that's a way we could both understand easily.

God, I just love how you write them out. It enough to want me to come back for more. <3 You have a very cliffhanger sense of writing them and I really enjoy it.

[kkscatnip]

♥ Thank you so much--it brings me joy to know you liked my story so much :D