Eight Points on the Compass, Kid/Liz/Patti, Table #1, Multi themes

Nov 15, 2008 04:07

Title: Eight Points on the Compass
Author: nenena
Rating: T for two extremely prudish bed scenes
Pairing: Kid/Liz/Patti
Table #1
Themes: Jump, On the Brink, Peace, Chances, Blood Oath, Fearless, Second Glance, and Brilliance

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user: nenena, ship: kid/liz/patti, table 1

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lmd_84 November 14 2008, 19:51:11 UTC
"I love it. It's lovely."...is my initial reaction to this. To be more coherent:

These are some wonderful little insights into the relationship between Kid, Liz, and Patti. You've captured Patti's attitude, Liz's fears, and Kid's 'snottiness' very well, along with the respect and love they seem to have for one another.

I think Blood Oath struck me as the best one, simply for how it uses the resonance of three soul, their mutual understanding, in helping Kid through something at once unusual - no human characters would be doing this - and for him mundane. I found a nice combination in there that felt very effective.

All-in-all, I really enjoyed this. Great stuff.

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nenena November 15 2008, 04:05:46 UTC
Thank you so much!

I almost didn't include "Blood Oath" because I wasn't sure if it fit well with the others, but having read your comment, now I'm glad that I did!

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ilikebigtoes November 14 2008, 22:11:34 UTC
That was wonderfully sweet and cute <3

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nenena November 15 2008, 04:06:24 UTC
Yay, thank you!

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alice_rm November 14 2008, 22:36:29 UTC
There are no words to describe how wild my inner fangirl went <3333 that was so lovely and incredible cute! and thanks for the compliments about that icon! LOL~ I'm glad that someones like's it

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nenena November 15 2008, 04:06:55 UTC
Yay, thanks for the thumbs-up!

(And seriously I love all of your icons. ALL of them!)

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mistygemmy February 22 2009, 02:48:39 UTC
Heeh!I went so fangirl on this :D Awesome job~

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nenena February 22 2009, 08:52:24 UTC
Thank you! ^_^

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