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emeraldsword in 40fandoms

fandoms 6 and 7

Mar 16, 2007 19:53

Pirates of the Caribbean
Ok, I've totally given up titles. This is a random drabble, centred on 'fog', no spoilers really. Set somewhere between the two films.
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If PotC were mine, there would definitely be more slash!

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marilyn manson, rpf, pirates of the caribbean, black goddess

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versipellis March 16 2007, 19:44:17 UTC

I liked them both a lot! Really good description. *hugs Jack* Both very realistic, both really things that people in that situation would think. Dialogue in the second one rang true and was often quite funny. Good.

emeraldsword April 3 2007, 20:14:23 UTC

sorry not to reply to this sooner, glad you liked!

sabethea March 17 2007, 10:36:33 UTC

Jack closed his eyes, reducing visibility from ten feet to zero,

I *love* that bit. *gurgles happily*

The second one was all dark and yet funny. And it made me feel like I'd been doing drugs before reading it...

emeraldsword March 17 2007, 15:31:04 UTC

LOL, I'm glad. When I went to my 7.30am(!!) class on Tuesday, the fog was seriously just that bad, it was incredible.

Glad you liked the second one. Marilyn Manson's a really intelligent man, but he also did/does a great many drugs (his autobiography is pretty interesting) and I think he kind of laughs at himself even as he takes himself seriously, if you know what I mean. I have no idea whether that came across - I'm hoping he doesn't sound stupid, at least!