For geekmama: Cutlass Turner

Dec 31, 2007 11:11

Title: Cutlass Turner
Recipient: geekmama
Fandom: PotC
Author: freckles42
Characters or Pairing: Elizabeth, Elizabeth/Will, mentions of Norrington
Rating: G
Warnings: None :)
Summary: 675 words. The world changes, and so does Elizabeth - but some things stay the same.
Notes: I do hope you like this, geekmama! I had originally written something else entirely (in an entirely ( Read more... )

rating: g, fandom: potc, genre: het, 2007, genre: gen

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geekmama December 31 2007, 17:36:38 UTC
This was a wonderfully true picture of Elizabeth, growing from girl to woman, taking her freedom and embracing the past as well. Beautifully written, almost like poetry. Thank you so very much for the gift!

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freckles42 December 31 2007, 17:43:53 UTC
You're welcome! Thank you for the lovely comment, and happy new year!

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geekmama December 31 2007, 17:45:32 UTC
Happy New Year to you, too!

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torn_eledhwen January 1 2008, 09:47:49 UTC
Lovely glimpse into Elizabeth's character. Nice work!

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freckles42 January 2 2008, 07:13:00 UTC
Thank you!

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ceria_taliesin January 1 2008, 14:21:59 UTC
I love the use of smells here to tie this together, and how she hopes their son will continue that. Very beautiful.

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freckles42 January 2 2008, 07:13:27 UTC
Thank you very much!

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alisanne January 2 2008, 04:11:41 UTC
That was so vividly painted, really lovely. And now I can almost taste the tang of salt in the air. *breathes deeply*
Well done!

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freckles42 January 2 2008, 08:17:29 UTC
Thank you very much!! :D *fans more salt air your way* ;D

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celandineb January 6 2008, 06:43:57 UTC
I loved this -- the descriptions, the smells, were so evocative, and seeing Elizabeth grow up was marvelous.

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