Comments | 3fan_holidays: Happy holidays, <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/alisanne">alisanne</a></strong>!

celandineb in 3fan_holidays

Happy holidays, alisanne!

Dec 21, 2006 14:20

Title: Sustenance
Recipient: alisanne
Fandom: Harry Potter
Author: cruisedirector
Pairing: Remus/Severus
Rating: PG13
Warnings: Absolutely no smut whatsoever, sorry!
Summary: Snape arrived unannounced -- much as Sirius had, months before -- with nothing but the clothes on his back.
Notes: Thanks to celandineb for beta-on-demand!

( Sustenance )

fandom: hp, rating: pg13, genre: slash, 2006

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cruisedirector December 21 2006, 21:58:23 UTC

Thank you! It wanted to turn into an epic, but I wrestled it into submission. *g*

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cruisedirector December 22 2006, 00:35:34 UTC

LOL! But it's a ficlet exchange, not a big schmoopy epic exchange!

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lastscorpion December 21 2006, 21:21:42 UTC

What a fine scene! I really enjoyed reading it.

cruisedirector December 21 2006, 21:59:10 UTC

Thanks so much! *G* I had been working on something post-war and Snape was just not in the mood for post-war.

cordeliadelayne December 21 2006, 21:22:28 UTC

Aw, very nice :D

cruisedirector December 21 2006, 22:00:15 UTC

Thank you! Is that in your icon an actual line from the show? I am way behind on SGA and trying to catch up with all of last season!

cordeliadelayne December 22 2006, 01:13:36 UTC

It is an actual line...and I can't for the life of me remember what episode it's from. I thought it was season one, but it could be beginning of season two.

alisanne December 21 2006, 22:12:37 UTC

Oh how wonderful!
Thank you so much. It's really perfectly them, isn't it? Remus is so calm, so relaxed, and Severus... always speaking in riddles, not expecting anything but rejection, yet he accepts Remus' food and company (and his touch!) readily enough.
No smut you say? No, but you had hope and the hint of buried UST, which was even better, I think.
What a lovely gift! Thank you. :)

cruisedirector December 22 2006, 00:10:10 UTC

I'm so glad you like it! I tried very hard to write Snarry for you, and Draco kept trying to insert himself, and then he tried to kick Harry out so he could do Snape himself and it was all a big mess. Then I asked Snape what he wanted and he said, irritably, "An adult." So this happend. *g*

I think Remus of all people should give Snape that chance, given that he was wrong about Sirius all those years!

alisanne December 22 2006, 00:57:21 UTC

Draco and Snape you say? *licks lips*
Um, you didn't completely rule that out for the future, did you? *g*
Really, it's a complete story now but no one (and I think I speak for everyone in this thread when I say this) would object to more. ;)

cruisedirector December 22 2006, 03:26:00 UTC

LOL -- no, I haven't ruled it out but I can't write it without it turning into crack! (See "The Forsaken Ones," which I can't imagine I could outdo in the Insane Snaco Department. *g*)

I promise, if there ends up being more, you will be the first to know! *hugs*

jynnxx December 21 2006, 22:23:24 UTC

I really enjoyed this, both characters were spot on, lovely :)

cruisedirector December 22 2006, 00:12:24 UTC

Thank you! I wasn't sure Snape was bitter and spiteful enough. But he didn't want to be thrown out, after all!

jynnxx December 22 2006, 08:51:20 UTC

he had an ulterior motive, is what I was thinking, he's so layered, what he's saying and what I think he means, especially with Remus, sex or not, this is one of my favorite snupin's *bookmarked*

cruisedirector December 28 2006, 17:27:03 UTC

Oh, he did have an ulterior motive, but I think he often has ulterior motives in the novels which he simply undercuts with his inability to keep a lid on his anger...I think the business with Harry and the pensieve had to be staged, he couldn't risk Harry poking around in his head any further, but he sometimes seems so incapable of subtlety that I wonder how the Death Eaters don't see through him.

Thank you! *g*