(for everyone) Apricity

Jan 12, 2015 19:59

For: everybody

Title: Apricity
Genre: fluff, romance
Rating: PG
Side-Pairing: slight!layhan
Length: 7,500 words
Summary: Jongin is a storm that wrecks Kyungsoo, who is all too willing, really.
Notes: i really hope you guys like this!

And his laughter sounds like a spectrum of colours, a plethora of things, like the first ray of daybreak and the glimmer of moonlight. )

rating: pg, day: 2, pairing: jongin/kyungsoo, genre: fluff, pairing: luhan/lay, genre: romance, length: oneshot

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hyoyeolo January 14 2015, 14:21:05 UTC
"Let's be boyfriends?"

I GIGGLED LIKE A BABY BEING TICKLED

I LOVE THE WHOLE STORY AND HOW YOU WROTE IT ;;;;; //cries

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friedchickai January 14 2015, 14:46:46 UTC
okay so first off hOW DO YOU WORD????? i seriously wanna quote everything in this fic like every single word was well thought of and the way you pieced them altogether in a sentence was really amazing HOW DO YOU DO THAT seriously

"But light and dark can't exist without each other; so entwined, and perhaps that's the beauty that comes with sunrises and sunsets. When the two collide and meld into one another, darkness morphing into the light and light filtering through the dark, it is the most magnificent." SO S O SO BEAUTIFUL

"They are like the two ends of a line, held together yet facing entirely different directions, until fate decides to tie the two ends together into a knot." i am sobbing

"When you are with the right person, everything gets complete, and it feels like the last puzzle piece has slipped into place." yes soo jongin !! is !! the !! missing !! piece ( ... )

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anonymous January 16 2015, 07:56:31 UTC
This is so absolutely adorable, and I love how you put so much thought in your words, and how you carefully pieced them tgt ;A; AHHHH

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bookishvice January 16 2015, 16:53:54 UTC
I loved that you showed this side of school life. Yeah, the smart and proper kid might be on everyone’s good graces, but sometimes they lead the loneliest lives. No real friends. Then Jongin realizing his mistake in judging Kyungsoo, guilt eating away at him so beautifully.
The twist of the secret online friend tho! Didn’t expect that! And I was cackling away like mad bc YASSSSSSSSSSS

…and oh my god shit," Jongin babbles,
LOL priceless babbling

Kyungsoo is laughing. And his laughter sounds like a spectrum of colours, a plethora of things, like the first ray of daybreak and the glimmer of moonlight. It's light-hearted and so genuine. And he laughs, and Jongin is smiling so hard that before he knows it he's laughing along with him, so bright and so, so spirited.
/dabs tear-stained cheeks/

“Let's be boyfriends?"
/PUKES RAINBOWS

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glazeddoughnuts January 27 2015, 11:46:23 UTC
wow. My cheeks are starting to hurt. someone please stop me from smiling with teeth exposed and downright dumbly staring at the laptop.
huhu

(okay I really need to study chem right now, bye~)

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