(for ridzithenerd) When Daybreak Comes

[kais]

For: ridzithenerd

Title: When Daybreak Comes
Genre: slight!angst, fluff
Rating: PG-13
Side-Pairing: Sehun/Tao
Warning: possible character death
Length: 6,898 words
Summary: Jongin likes to think that Kyungsoo cares. Well maybe he does-a little too much.
Notes: there seems to be some parts that I haven’t done justice TTOTT anyway, I hope this isn’t as ugly as

Comments

[ridzithenerd]

S P O T!

[ridzithenerd]

i love this???? oh my god this was so beautiful, i think i almost started crying at some parts. i'm so happy you decided on this prompt!! i loved how you organized it with the bold print saying something but meaning another and the development of the relationship through the letters, especially when kyungsoo started telling jongin about himself

AND THEN THE ENDING i'm such a fun of ambiguous/implied endings bc i'm just gonna assume they end up being happily beautiful together asjsghjksdgasl i just loved this story so much, thank you thank you thank you for writing it!!! ♡

[xiujaemin]

i'm really happy that you liked it, even though it's quite lacking (i planned on writing this out as 10k, but it ended up being 6k instead)

i really liked your prompts that it took me a few days just to pick one and make a concrete plot for that one, but i really enjoyed writing this especially the thrill when i was finishing this only a few days away from the deadline ehehe

[ridzithenerd]

noooo, omg, you did a great job. the way you wrote it was so unlike how I imagined it, and ended up being better than what I imagined. haha, I know that thrill bc I did the same thing lol oops. thank you to infinity for writing this ❤❤❤❤❤❤

[anonymous]

HIUHIU you saved my heart just in time I ;;;; am so grateful ??? that this is a happy ending, I was prepared for the worst, thank God the worst didn't happen!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like how their relationship developed through letters, how Kyungsoo stops being clinical and pours more of himself, how Jongin puts up a fight, I ;;; thank you so much!

[xiujaemin]

it didn't show as much character development as i would've wanted to write, but i'm glad you liked it!

[akaonim]

Omg i want more lol

[adorable_wookie]

So beautiful! I would like to ask for more but I know, this ending as it is, is a fitting ending for this story. At least the war is over, jongin survive and kaisoo would meet.

[icedtealemon]

At the last phrase, I was like..
AH-!! and gawked at the screen for few moments there xD really, just.. Staring at it like this O∆O
It stopped me right at my tracks. I mean, of course it would, it's the end. Silly me, it's just that I didn't see the track was a dead end. A beautiful dead end for that matter, but a much wonderful road that I would have like to keep walking on. I still wanna be part of their journey, I didn't expect it to leave me wanting for moreee hahahahahahaha but gdi I love this fic.