The First Story: In the Begining

Jul 23, 2010 17:36



Title: In the Begining
Word Count: 2,944
Prompt: Begining

In the Begining )

31 in 31, short story, food

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snarg July 24 2010, 01:46:58 UTC
Fun. :) I was a little confused by the beginning. After about the first screen I was guessing that this was going to be the story of how you came to do this project, but I like what it was actually about better.

I liked Candace, and when she said that Stacy had dropped her driver's license I thought, "No, you lifted it." But maybe I just watch too much Leverage. :)

Nice call-back on the Paris reference.

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31in31 July 25 2010, 05:15:52 UTC
Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback!

I was thinking I would have to re-do the begining. I started writing one thing and it ended up being something completely different. I think it is very possible that Candace lifted Stacy's licence... I'll just let the readers decide :D

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The Beginning anonymous July 30 2010, 01:54:16 UTC
I enjoyed the story but a bit perplexed about the ending. I liked the twists and turns.

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