Comments | 318_nathanm_3: Wanderer, 2278 Words

318_nathanm_3

Wanderer, 2278 Words

Sep 09, 2009 16:52

What is this? Well, you tell me! What do YOU think it is?

( A new beginning )

Comments 5

Wooooooooeeeeeeee! carvertown September 10 2009, 00:59:16 UTC

I can not express how excited I was to read this. I'll be honest...this was awesome! I can tell that taking some time off and writing Harbinger has really helped with your writing. I'm sure it helped with your passion when writing this now too. I thought the use of comrades really didn't fit though...I honestly just substituted men in and it flowed better. Overall, you painted a really good picture and it was really easy to follow and play in my head. Well wrote!

hello_hank September 10 2009, 17:47:31 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

318_nathanm_3 September 10 2009, 18:03:32 UTC

I don't know what to say to that.
Wait, yes I do. Is that a good or a bad scream?

hello_hank September 14 2009, 17:31:48 UTC

GOOOOD SCREEEEAAAM!!!!!

318jamesd3 September 11 2009, 22:26:32 UTC

I'm glad you are writing Lacrymosa again. I would agree with Mooch, Harbinger has helped your writing. I liked the new setting with familiar elements (El, Ala, Orion).