Eternity

[312z]

Robin wrung her scarf in her hands and tried to remember what her mother had told her before she set out. She had said it in passing; as if it had meant nothing at all. Robin had a terrible memory for things that are hiding behind meaninglessness

Comments

[ex_new_dawn]

just wanted to say that:
1. added you (hope you dont mind, n dont feel like you have to add me back)
2. i enjoyed this tale :)

[312z]

1. I don't mind.
2. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[burnedfeather]

Great story! I love the use of "words can kill" type weaponry...
I always enjoy your writting!

[312z]

Thanks, I like that idea too.

[autumnsea]

You're very clever and this was so very well done.

"It has the power if I mean it" ... ah so true, so very true. I love that part.

Just two edits:

Robins breath frosted in the cold air. Robin's breath

and

Don’t catch cold before you do, Its said, in a voice that was her mother’s. It said.

[312z]

Eh, thanks.
My proof reading must be getting lax. :)

[autumnsea]

You are so bad at accepting compliments graciously from me. ;P

One day I'm going to say 'This is crap" and you might a) miss it entirely and say "Eh thanks." or b) shock you to the ground.

:)

[312z]

Eh, thanks.