The Cairn (Part three)

Aug 31, 2006 00:10

Teddy sighs.

“Save him then, Prince. On your head be it.”

The Devil laughs as Teddy falls. Teddy’s face breaks into a smile, but the Devil’s claws mar the unexpected happiness gracing his features. His eyes roll back as he hits the grass.

The Devil laughs.

Kevin screams.

The Cairn sits at the top of of a hill ( Read more... )

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autumnsea August 31 2006, 01:18:40 UTC
This really was a great tale and so easily told. You have that ease of style. I really like the ending. And the old adage: "Better the devil you know" doesn't fit this case .. as he was a nasty one. ;)

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312z August 31 2006, 05:27:45 UTC
Glad you liked the ending. I left it
so's that I could come back to it one
day, should I feel so inclined. Once
they're finished building of course. :)

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