Fic: Shift, Part 3 (Jim/Pam) M

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“Dunder Mifflin, this is Pam.”

Jim’s head snaps up. He’s long since given up the pretense of indifference to her voice floating across the room; his only concession to the appearance of work is to keep his hands on his keyboard to avoid another lecture from Dwight. He doesn’t want any distractions in this new business he has of analyzing Pam’s

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[amaliak]

okay, let me just say that this was GREAT. I love how it isn't about Pam just breaking up with Roy and just falling into Jim's arms. She's taking her time and trying (with difficulty) to work through the multiple problems that she's faced with. This is firstly about Jim and Pam's friendship, and I'm very happy with the realistically heartbreaking way that you've presented it.

Thanks so much.
cheers.
--Lex

[dragonflyxeyes]

This was really good. I didn't really think about how Roy's mom would react and that seems a pretty good assumstion. I really liked this and I can't wait to read the next one. =]

[lipscoldasclay]

Yay! I was waiting for the third part! It was so wonderful. Beautifully written and I could totally see it playing out like this..

When Jim left the paint brush and note, I think I literally let out an "Awee!"