Sorting Day

[raira]

Title: Sorting Day
Rating: G
Characters: Hermione, Harry, Ginny, Ron
Author's Notes: This is the other idea I had for Challenge #142: Random Elements Challenge # 6. I hope you're not all sick of hearing from me! I'd appreciate feedback about whether this story makes sense. I knew what I wanted to say, but I'm not sure how clear I was in getting it

Comments

[apisa_b]

How very sad.
It took me until the last sentence to realise what exactly was going on. Then I reread it carefully and understood - a sad tale.

[raira]

I was hoping it would all make sense in the end. Thanks! :D

[scatteredlogic]

Oh, what a sad story. Very nicely done, though. The initial contrast between what's read and what's fantasy was particularly well done.

Hmm, yu have a couple of typos that you might want to edit: Weasely instead of Weasley, and McGonnagle instead of McGonagall, but hurried typing is always to blame for a few of those. ;)

[raira]

That and I can't spell. :) Thanks for catching those.

[scatteredlogic]

~snicker~ I just realized that I'd typed "yu" have a couple of typos.

[shiv5468]

Poor Hermione; you've certainly caught the poignancy of her loss and her dreams.