Butterfly Arc -- #6

[black_saturniid]

Title: Literate Butterflies
Theme: #5 Essays, articles, newspaper
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama, humor
Summary: He could never wrap his mind around the wild tangles of her job and her mentality, but at least he tried.
Criticism: Moderately harsh.  If that makes sense.  Don't tell me what I wrote was total crap and I should never consider a career as an

Comments

[herbeautifullie]

Though I was a little confused (I'm guessing there are parts of these that I have yet to read) I must say that it was a delightful read. Your dialouge is amazing, and I like the way you described things while not making it drag on and on. It's a great job, overall!

[black_saturniid]

^^ You're right, there are. Look in my journal under "butterfly" tags; the first one is Poisonous Butterflies. I thought you haad already read them :/ Sorry about that.

I should put in a warning, huh? yeah... ^_^ Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and that my descriptions don't take for frickin' ever anymore. (The only time I do that is during National Novel Writing Month, for obvious reasons.)

-Shona

[principessar]

This is very interesting and well-written! I love the descriptions of each character -- they are unusual and funny even as they are perfectly clear, like about the "Sonic" hairstyle or the veins making the woman look older. I also find the idea of a school for assassins funny :p Anyway, great job and I'm looking forward to more of your work :)

[black_saturniid]

Woot! I make people laugh! I'm very happy you enjoyed it -- I hope to see you around. ^^ I shall endevour to not sour my writing as I study for finals. :D

-Shona

[principessar]

Yeah, I love your writing style, and your stories are so interesting! I feel like I leave the stupidest comments -- people say such beautiful things to my stories but then my comments are ... not as pretty 0.0 but I really like your stories!

And good luck on the finals! I've got exams soon, too 0.0 I'm an exchange student now so they'll be hard 0.0