Seifer always has been a boy just begging for someone (read:Squall) to take him down to size.
It does make me wonder though if he ever played the other side of this game. How *did* the Discipline Committee enforce the rules back in Balamb Gardan, hmm?
I agree that Seifer's ego could use a slight deflation, and that Squall is the man to do it. As for back in Balamb, I think Seifer scolded, Raj flexed and if that failed, Fuu kicked the heck outta your ankles.
That's the reason I never bitch when Race bows out of irc to write porn. >.>
That was...different. In the very best of ways. Awesome job, babe - I love it when you write Squall like this. I also liked how Seifer was able to submit without giving up something of himself. Still very much Seifer Almasy.
Thanks, Sweetie. Most of the fun of the scene was trying to make them stay in character. And this is the older, wiser, Squall, who grew into his responsibilities and realized, yes, he is the best man for the job.
Neither Squall nor Laguna exactly wanted a harem; I suspect if given a choice, Laguna's harem at least would not have held Seifer. But, you know how it is, everyone just has to play the cards life deals them.
*speculates on who squall, seifer and laguna would actually pick for their harems* bearing in mind that when left to themselves, harem members entertained each other...
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Seifer always has been a boy just begging for someone (read:Squall) to take him down to size.
It does make me wonder though if he ever played the other side of this game. How *did* the Discipline Committee enforce the rules back in Balamb Gardan, hmm?
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Glad you liked.
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That was...different. In the very best of ways. Awesome job, babe - I love it when you write Squall like this. I also liked how Seifer was able to submit without giving up something of himself. Still very much Seifer Almasy.
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at first i cracked up at the idea of squall owning a harem, and even more so at the idea of laguna owning one, but the smut distracted me.
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Neither Squall nor Laguna exactly wanted a harem; I suspect if given a choice, Laguna's harem at least would not have held Seifer. But, you know how it is, everyone just has to play the cards life deals them.
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I never got to beta this one. ;_; but i think i see something of my writing style in there somehow, eh? ::grins at race.::
very well done. Seifer's so hot. <3_<3
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