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Mar 29, 2005 00:58

Pairing/Fandom: Squall x Seifer / Final Fantasy 8 ( Read more... )

theme: the harem, pairing: seifer/squall, fandom: final fantasy 8

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Comments 18

lodrelhai March 29 2005, 00:49:40 UTC
Very. Very. Hot.

Seifer always has been a boy just begging for someone (read:Squall) to take him down to size.

It does make me wonder though if he ever played the other side of this game. How *did* the Discipline Committee enforce the rules back in Balamb Gardan, hmm?

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raceulfson April 4 2005, 05:49:51 UTC
I agree that Seifer's ego could use a slight deflation, and that Squall is the man to do it. As for back in Balamb, I think Seifer scolded, Raj flexed and if that failed, Fuu kicked the heck outta your ankles.

Glad you liked.

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dark_squall April 4 2005, 08:01:15 UTC
Apart from Squall. Seifer just gave him a good reaming and had done with it.

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digital_angels March 29 2005, 01:12:03 UTC
Congratulations. That made me blush to Hyne's own hell, and that is rather the feat. Well written, very sexy. <3 I liked it.

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raceulfson April 4 2005, 05:50:39 UTC
Thank you! I shall try to make you blush with the next ones, too.

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pixxers March 29 2005, 01:35:28 UTC
That's the reason I never bitch when Race bows out of irc to write porn. >.>

That was...different. In the very best of ways. Awesome job, babe - I love it when you write Squall like this. I also liked how Seifer was able to submit without giving up something of himself. Still very much Seifer Almasy.

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raceulfson April 4 2005, 05:52:37 UTC
Thanks, Sweetie. Most of the fun of the scene was trying to make them stay in character. And this is the older, wiser, Squall, who grew into his responsibilities and realized, yes, he is the best man for the job.

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pixxers April 4 2005, 09:59:36 UTC
I'm glad you like this Squall - he'll be starring in your birthday fic. ^_^

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missingwatch March 29 2005, 02:58:39 UTC
damn that was hot.

at first i cracked up at the idea of squall owning a harem, and even more so at the idea of laguna owning one, but the smut distracted me.

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raceulfson April 4 2005, 05:54:44 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked the smut.

Neither Squall nor Laguna exactly wanted a harem; I suspect if given a choice, Laguna's harem at least would not have held Seifer. But, you know how it is, everyone just has to play the cards life deals them.

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missingwatch April 4 2005, 15:49:54 UTC
*speculates on who squall, seifer and laguna would actually pick for their harems* bearing in mind that when left to themselves, harem members entertained each other...

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kyofujimiya March 29 2005, 13:21:32 UTC
Wow! This was very well done, and I really like your writing style! Thank you very much for sharing the hotness. ^_^

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_acid_rain_ March 31 2005, 12:58:01 UTC
::cracks up:: this looks familiar. ::grins::

I never got to beta this one. ;_; but i think i see something of my writing style in there somehow, eh? ::grins at race.::

very well done. Seifer's so hot. <3_<3

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raceulfson April 4 2005, 05:56:14 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Stay tuned for Darksquall's entry, she can make your panties melt while still in the wardrobe.

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dark_squall April 4 2005, 08:02:02 UTC
Aw, shucks. ::blush:: I can't hope to top this one.

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