Comments | 30_lemons: Lina/Gourry, Slayers

the_flowergirl in 30_lemons

Lina/Gourry, Slayers

May 22, 2006 22:47

Pairing/Fandom: Lina Inverse and Gourry Gabriev, Slayers
Theme: #13, The Stables
Title: In Secret
Author/Artist: TFG
Disclaimer: I’m fairly sure they’re not mine, but I’m not actually sure if Kanzaka owns them anymore. I’m sure someone does

It's not as prony as the other ones. Sorry.

In Secret

-A trip to the stables becomes more than they’ve bargained ( Read more... )

pairing: lina/gourry, fandom: slayers, theme: the stables

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the_flowergirl May 23 2006, 04:01:58 UTC

I don't know what the hell is wrong with this comp, and it's not Lina's thumbs, but I'm sure hers are calloused too.

(Check the archieve, I have more.)

Nags and more....I bet you didn't miss me yukinoomoni July 1 2006, 04:30:18 UTC

"He could take her not, she seemed ready."

A little confusing. I wasn't sure what you meant.

"plunging him deeper into her darkness."

I like this. It's kinda neat.

*giggles* I like it. It's cute, and I like how you show Lina as a real, live woman with a sex-drive and a need for quick sex.

Re: Nags and more....I bet you didn't miss me the_flowergirl July 1 2006, 04:47:13 UTC

"He could take her not, she seemed ready."

Why hello there, Mr Typo how are you. It's supposed to be NOW. I really need to proofread better.

Haven't you said that about every lemon I've written? ;p

Re: Nags and more....I bet you didn't miss me yukinoomoni July 1 2006, 04:47:50 UTC

If I have, I feel stupid....*blush*