Comments | 30_houshin: Savior/ #3: succor; savior; sanctuary

samisweet in 30_houshin

Savior/ #3: succor; savior; sanctuary

Aug 30, 2006 19:16

Title: Savior
Author: samisweet
Theme: #3 succor, savior, sanctuary
Summary: Usagi is drowning in her sorrows. On a rainy day in empty streets, who would be willing to save a lonely, broken girl?
Pairing/Characters: Omi/Usagi
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Sorry, I don't own Weiss Kreuz or Sailor Moon

It was one of those days that never went well. One of those ( Read more... )

theme: succor; savior; sanctuary, character: usagi tsukino, author: samisweet

Comments 5

commaqueen September 1 2006, 06:06:26 UTC

Oh goodness, Sam! I don't have time to make a proper post on this right now, because until Friday night or Saturday I'm just not going to have the time/energy to read anything but my homework for english and anthropology, but I **DO** intend to give this a good read and review. I just wanted to let you know you haven't been ignored or forgotten or unseen. Sorry it's going to take me so long.

commaqueen September 2 2006, 15:50:21 UTC

Oh, it's ok! I don't mind ^_^ I understand that since school has started again, and since college is already in full session, people don't have that much time anymore. Good luck with your homework!

commaqueen September 4 2006, 04:51:30 UTC

I just wanted to apologize again for how long it took me to review you, Sam. I didn't mean to leave you hanging ( ... )

samisweet September 17 2006, 19:12:52 UTC

Wow. I can't believe I actually have a few moments to myself to reply to reviews ^-^;; The past few weeks have been pretty near hell for me. I didn't realize that the IB program was this difficult!

Anyways, thanks for taking the time to leave some concrit. I see the minor grammar/spelling errors; I'll fix them when I get some more time.

This story was rushed before, and I elongated it a bit, but I know it's still rushed. ^_^;; I guess I'll be working on the ending a bit more in the coming months, lol. I think I went too far with Usagi's transformation as well (I go through 'moods' when I'm writing. I guess I was in a 'Mary Sue mood' -_-;) so I'll be fixing it soon.

I'm sorry that this is so short; there's so much more I want to say, but given the time, I think I'll have to cut this short. Thanks, again, for reviewing!!!

-samisweet

(The comment has been removed)

Re: Late Review samisweet September 17 2006, 19:22:25 UTC

Oh, it's alright. Like I told Nozomi-san, things are going crazy for me at the moment. I'm sorry for the insanely late reply. I actually agree with the fact that the emotions were short-live -because they were. It was really bad during my first attempt, and I'm happy to say it improved on this one. Like I said to Nozomi-san, I was in one of my 'moods' and chose to follow a MarySue Usagi ^_^;; Lol. Thanks for taking the time to review; I appreciate it. I'm sorry the reply is so short!

-samisweet