Theme #4 Stream-of-consciousness/June 30/Hotaru

[phedre44]

Title: June 30

Comments

[commaqueen]

Wow... just wow, Phedre. You really worked that theme; I'm impressed. X3 And even more than just working the theme, you made it work for Farf. Everything runs together... just a wonderful mish-mash of hate and pain. Definitely a very Farf thought process. It's one thing to experience Farf's madness third person like in Usa-chan's Cold Love Twisted Love, and then to experience it first hand.

You deserve much praise... and this really just goes to show that a piece doesn't have to be oodles of pages long in order to capture potency or to be a "good" piece. Frankly, this has to be the best Hotaru fic I've ever read. If only more people had your natural talent, Phe.

o.O

[pokahydee]

Wow.... scary, you really capured Farf amazingly (if that's a word :p). This is an excellent piece, you should be proud^^

[jadecerise]

Oh my... That was... amazing. It was beautiful and terrifying at the same time.

You did a great job! Kudos. ^^