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The Wraith (alyxbradford) (5 Dec)

Dec 05, 2005 21:27

Title: The Wraith
Author: alyxbradford
House: Slytherin
Date/Challenge: 5 Dec - haunted
Characters: Bellatrix, Narcissa
Rating: PG

( The Wraith )

bellatrix black, author: alyxbradford, rating: pg, narcissa black

Comments 3

rolled_feather December 6 2005, 16:54:48 UTC

This is so chilling. The descriptions of Bella being so frail, pale, and having an appearance of a Wraith, was spectacular. I could envision all of what you wrote. This piece was a true pleasure to read. Bravo!

~Quill :)

anonymous December 6 2005, 19:04:08 UTC

so bleak and desolate. Awesome.

la_onza December 6 2005, 19:04:47 UTC

I agree! With myself. Forgot to log in.