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8 - Feckless - Bus Gamer - 3/30

Jan 16, 2007 21:51

Title: Feckless
Author/Artist: redex
Pairing: Kazu/Toki/Nobu
Fandom: Bus Gamer
Theme: Fyre's 8
Ratings/Warnings: PG - brief sex mentions, language
Comments: Nakajyo Nobuto as the lone wolf, an introspective. He'd be the last to open up, but the first to have sex with them.
( You'd think I'd learn to come up with better titles. )

bus gamer, mishiba toki, nakajyo nobuto, fyre08, saitoh kazuo, !themefyre

Comments 4

tresa_cho January 17 2007, 02:56:55 UTC

I think I love you for writing Bus Gamer. Not too fond of the second person point of view, I think it detracts from the story a bit. First person might have worked a bit better.

Nice prose, though. Very poignant. Keep writing!

redex January 18 2007, 22:29:07 UTC

You're welcome~ >3 I don't usually spend much time thinking about whether something should be in one or another perspective unless I catch myself switching in the middle of the fic, but thank you for the interpretation. ♥

fyretoppaaa March 16 2007, 08:55:32 UTC

Mrawr, Nobuto is still sexy even in second person and when you're in his head. Wild monkey sex on Kazuo = A++++++. XDDDDDDD On another note, I adore those closing lines. ;3 ♥~

redex March 16 2007, 21:25:07 UTC

Damn, typo in that one too. Necessary, not unnecessary. I do try to please. :P ♥