I Don't Know You Anymore (Saiyuki, Goku/Sanzo, Pop#9)
TITLE: I Don’t Know You Anymore
AUTHOR: Eyes of Shinigami
PAIRING: Goku/Sanzo
FANDOM: Saiyuki
RATING: Light R, but R nonetheless.
TIMELINE: After the Journey West
THEME: Pop #9 I Don’t Know You Anymore by Savage Garden ( Read more... )
AUTHOR: Eyes of Shinigami
PAIRING: Goku/Sanzo
FANDOM: Saiyuki
RATING: Light R, but R nonetheless.
TIMELINE: After the Journey West
THEME: Pop #9 I Don’t Know You Anymore by Savage Garden ( Read more... )
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Goku did well all by himself, didn't he? I always knew the monkey would. No wonder the farmer wants him to marry his daughter. :P I liked Sanzo going back in the end, if only for a short while (to calm his frazzled nerves). Sanzo is only too fun. ^______^
And of course a big round of applause for seme!Goku. *grins*
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I really, really like the idea of Goku being able to hold his own. I think that he needs to get out from under Sanzo (only in the figurative sense, of course. XDDD) and spread his wings before he can really realize his potential. That's why I think he will be a stronger person when Sanzo returns.
Did you know I put that in there because of you? XD I thought that you'd like that idea. *snicker*
Gotta love seme!Goku. *grin*
*HUGS*
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*blush* You're too kind, Pexi-chan. I wanted to portray just how different of a person Goku had become, without ruining the potential that he still loved Sanzo.
And it wouldn't end up perfect. It wasn't going to be. *laughs* I liked that you saw that. It makes me teh happeh!
*GLOMP* Thanks! *HUGGLE*
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I miss you. I need you. Won’t you come back with me? - perfect, i tell you. PERFECT.
I love how you build the scenes toward that ending. Your dialogues are also made of win. AND YOUR DESCRIPTION OF THE SEX AND AFTER-SEX SCENES IS TOTALLY BRILLIANT.
*gives infinite ♥s*
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I, too, like a nice mix between angst and fluff, since the two even each other out and can make a fic that much more enjoyable.
Three cheers for seme!Goku!!
I was trying to convey Sanzo's feelings without making him OOC. I have a terrible time with getting both he and Hakkai right when I write them. Goku and Gojyo come naturally to me. *laughs*
^/////^ You made me blush! I'm getting better about trusting their speech to further the story.
If you like that, you should check out my actual smutfics! XD
*gives you infinite <3 back!*
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But yes, I do believe that it's quite difficult to write Sanzo and Hakkai. That's why I really can't finish any fics that I start. One part of the pairing is so difficult to write. OTL
Ah, I'll do that. I'll venture into your other fics when I have MORE free time. (Acads and organization work is killing me and my time XD *dead*)
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I'm always afraid that I'm writing them too OOC when I do. And see, I'm just lazy, which is why I really like writing one shots. XDDD
Sanzo and Hakkai as a pairing...I could never pull it off. Too much angst, and...meh. I just don't really jive with that pairing. ^____^ I don't mind reading it on occasion though.
No worries! I understand completely! I'm a full time college student and I work almost full time. It's no worries. They'll still be there.
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I have more in the works, so no worries. I'll be able to indulge your love for Goku and Sanzo the best I can.
The next one will be a little bit angsty. Just a little.
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must be during my "dark" days
i like a confident goku,
but one who knows what he needs and wants
and is open to the non-verbal clues that is all that sanzo is capable of...
..."all right with him"
same over here.
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