SPN: These Little Trespasses (Wincest)

May 09, 2007 04:00


TITLE: These Little Trespasses
AUTHOR: Mari [3090]
PAIRING/FANDOM: Sam Winchester / Dean Winchester [Supernatural]
RATING: Hard P3-13
CATAGORY: language, angst, hurt/comfort (sort of), sexual tension, character death (to some degree)
SPOILERS: Season Two of Supernatural - particularly In My Time of Dying and Everybody Loves a ClownDISCLAIMER: These ( Read more... )

sam winchester, wincest, spn, dean winchester

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albeitslowly May 9 2007, 10:45:07 UTC
Oh darlin', I just loved this to teeny tiny little bits-0-schmoop. So perfect and hurty but still hopeful. Sometimes the boys put on those little faces that say, "I don't wanna get it, because if I do, I'll lose hope," but these little pieces remind us what goes on behind those painted on masks, even the parts they might not know about themselves. Thanks so much,

Tracy

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3090 May 9 2007, 15:14:31 UTC
Thank you for commenting. Like you mentioned, I tried to convey the emotional walls/masks that the boys have, with a little sprinkle of hope. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

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zenamydog May 9 2007, 12:17:08 UTC
Okay, so right now i am... well... i am just breathless.

Simply wonderful last line!

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3090 May 9 2007, 15:15:11 UTC
Wow, thank you! I'm glad you liked the ending, because I was a little unsure about it. Thanks for reading.

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lvlysnidrus May 9 2007, 12:32:58 UTC
Oh, gosh, that was beautiful from start to finish.

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3090 May 9 2007, 15:15:53 UTC
Well thank you :) I appreciate that. Thank you for reading and commenting.

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felisblanco May 9 2007, 17:39:35 UTC
That was beautiful and the last line was absolutely perfect. Oh boys. *squishes them*

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3090 May 10 2007, 00:41:42 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading!

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wearethestars May 10 2007, 05:27:21 UTC
OH OH OH! This is everything I could've hoped for and MORE. It's amazing and beautifully written and I teared up and smiled and THERE WAS HUGGING!!!! YOU totally win! ♥

I'd go for a more coherent comment, but my gf is putting varnish on a table in the house and I think my brain is addled.

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3090 May 10 2007, 21:19:24 UTC
Yes, there was hugging! Finally!! ^.^
Thanks for reading (and for inspiring the fic in the first place.) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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wearethestars May 11 2007, 03:54:53 UTC
It's AMAZING!!!!

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