Broken - Chapter 15

Jul 17, 2007 17:22

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cozy_cupcake July 18 2007, 02:45:45 UTC
This was so beautiful! I loved it so much

"You know, like Danny and Olivia in Grease," Cameron mocked her own enthusiasm.

"You mean Danny and San…" he stopped before he completely incriminated himself and flashed her his ‘I am not amused’ look. "And they didn’t have matching jackets," he finally gave in and added.

That was funny.

This had me hysterical Cameron felt a little humph under her, "Seriously, you’ll owe me four bucks and I won’t get to find out if this guy finds his happiness with a ‘y’."

;)

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2tailswaggin July 18 2007, 11:14:01 UTC
LOL...you surprised me with the dorky Grease line. It almost got cut. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Poor House just can't leave a tender moment alone can he? ;)

Thanks for keeping up and for the comments!!

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bmax67 July 18 2007, 02:57:29 UTC
OH!! I love your little additions in that last part!

I'm so happy you added that section. *hugs*

Damn, you're turning me into a fluffball...

I'm soooo loving this adventure. Not just House and Cam's but ours too!

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2tailswaggin July 18 2007, 11:20:30 UTC
I swear B...of all your suggestions that have just brought so much dimension to this story - this was the awesomest...lol. *huge hug*

I kinda could have gone either way on the little stagger at the door but the introspection after he put her down was certainly necessary. Thanks for pointing that out. You know after we talked I just rattled all that stuff down...that was the quickest writing-to-posting section ever I think. lol

Yes...you are a huge fluff ball now. I think I spotted the word "cute" more than once in your comments...geez. I didn't know if I was more disturbed by your saying it or about your saying it about my stuff! LOL

I'm sad that it's almost over...but wow...it's time - my grass finally needs mowed! I'm looking forward to picking up steam on yours soon. So House and Cam might be done for a while - but we're not! hehehe... oh my word...that's gooey...lol.

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bmax67 July 18 2007, 13:15:02 UTC
It's so funny how things just materialize when we discuss this story. How many times has that happened now?

You wrote that little scene in a very realistic way. I'm glad you added the stumble because House is still not 100% and his balance is still out of whack so you made it realistic.

Yes, I admit it. Some of you fluffiness has defintely permeated into my brain. Stop with the mind melding thing already! :)

We'll play with my fic for a while. I think i need an escape from the gooeyness, I'm getting all sticky!

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2tailswaggin July 18 2007, 23:03:31 UTC
How many times has that happened now?

A lot! I'm so not creative but I just love writing the cool things you come up with!

Stop with the mind melding thing already! :)

Never!!! *insert evil laugh here*

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maybebaby1280 July 18 2007, 02:59:24 UTC
I'm so in love with this story. Love that they're (slowly!) becoming more comfortable with each other, but not in an OOC way. Love that he asked her to move in!! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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2tailswaggin July 18 2007, 11:59:18 UTC
And I'm so in love with you being in love with my story! :)

Thanks so much for following along...I think this is the first time I've seen you comment!? Thanks!! Nice icon! :)

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maybebaby1280 July 18 2007, 23:33:07 UTC
Yeah, I started reading when you were already on, like, chapter 13. I'm guilty of lurking for the last two chapters, but I will make it up to you if you write more - soon! Please?? *puppy dog eyes*

I heart _dennis_csi_ for making an icon of House showing us his beautiful smile :)

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2tailswaggin July 18 2007, 23:41:04 UTC
Working on it. :)

He does have a nice smile...and I don't realize how little we see House give us a genuine one until he does then wow! *faint* lol

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ar06e21 July 18 2007, 03:44:54 UTC
omfg, he carried her to the room and I just died the whole time :) It was very...very well done. Everything about it, I could picture perfectly--from how he was carrying her to his struggle. It was amazing.

Really glad Cam pinned him down and told him that she wasn't sorry for dropping the L bomb :) Great scene as well.

Can't wait for the next update!!!

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2tailswaggin July 18 2007, 12:02:26 UTC
Thanks!!!

Really glad Cam pinned him down and told him that she wasn't sorry for dropping the L bomb

I couldn't help myself...guess she couldn't any longer either. :) I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for reading and for the kind comments!

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dragynflies July 18 2007, 05:37:31 UTC
I love this fanfic like whoa, omg.

I nearly got teary when he carried her to bed. You win.

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2tailswaggin July 18 2007, 12:04:35 UTC
Bmax wins for suggesting it! :)

I'm thrilled it worked for you...I just love that! :)

Thanks so much for following along and for taking the time to comment.

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