Broken - Chapter 9

[2tailswaggin]

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[tiflissa]

Yay! *pounce*

This chapter works so well. I don't know what you were worried about, but I can understand the anxiety that comes with the writing territory. Well, stop worrying, because this was perfect! I loved Wilson's flashback to the day of the accident.

But this was my favorite part:
He mumbled ‘whipped’ into his napkin as he wiped his mouth.
"Wwwhhatt?" House mumbled in return, chicken in his mouth and BBQ sauce on his fingers.
"Wipe?" Wilson covered, handing House a towelette.
*snicker* Wilson wins at life.

Great job, hon! :D

[tiflissa]

And just to be geeky: FIRST! :D

[2tailswaggin]

Thanks again! You're always so quick! Do you have your friends page attached to some kind of electrode or something? hehe

[tiflissa]

*snort* I wish. I'm just incredibly bored at the moment. So, thank you for saving me! :D

[2tailswaggin]

Poor Cuddy still didn't get much face time. Oh well...I'm afraid of her, what can I say?

Please don't tell me you're that cruel to the poor man.

Which? About the phantom pain or Sam staying over? ;)

Thanks again for reading...and commenting!

[bmax67]

My headache is gone...thankfully.

Did I mention how sick I was of reading Chapter 9? LOL

Don't be surprised if there are still a few errors here and there. That chapter about killed me! Can't imagine what it's done to you. Poor thing.

[2tailswaggin]

Ugh...live and learn on this one. It was too long in a lot of aspects. Somehow I've gone from rushing through things to dragging everyone painfully through the mud. hehehee... I think I'm done with House/Wilson for a while.

[bmax67]

I don't think you dragged them through the mud, it just ended up being a lot happening on one day.

With the flashback it was like combining two days into one!

Then we couldn't leave poor Cam out at the end, it's a House/Cam fic for Pete's sake!

:)

You did great!

Oh, and I'll have Ch.10 back to you shortly..... like in the next day.

[2tailswaggin]

I think I'm afraid of people losing interest....it's my paranoia. :\

About chapter 10 - do you mind sending it back to me tonight no matter if you've added anything? I want to put in some final stuff then you can have it for the whoooooole weekend. Lucky you. hehe

soo...you sick of this yet? lol

[jovsg]

Yay! I love this fic. I'm always happy for updates.

Nice job. LIked the flashback a lot and the whole scene at Mickey's had me ROTFLMAO. LOL, Wilson.

Can't wait for more. Looking forward to both H and C getting out of the hospital.

[2tailswaggin]

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Looking forward to both H and C getting out of the hospital.

Me too...I'm sick of that place. ;)

[ar06e21]

This installment was awesome. Loved the flashback with Wilson--lots of emotions there. LMAO at House and Wilson at lunch :) Great job on this and can't wait for more!!!

[2tailswaggin]

Thanks for coming back again!...and for the comments!! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.