14. curse

Mar 27, 2010 21:34

Title: 14. curse (from 50 hearts challenge)
Author: 2PMconspiracy
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Angst, slight supernatural, romance, fluff
Pairing: ONKEY! ♥ and a side of HYUNMIN! :D (just for you, xxqod unnie!)
Summary: Lee Jinki is a successful businessman with a problem. Another businessman, Choi Minho, keeps trying to convince him to merge their companies, ( Read more... )

!50 hearts challenge, !fanfic, pairing: onew/key, pairing: jonghyun/taemin

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2pmconspiracy March 27 2010, 13:35:58 UTC
spot for my dear ringdingdong19 unnie!

love you unnie! ♥ feel better soon! and i hope you liked this ^^

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ringdingdong19 March 27 2010, 14:20:29 UTC
aaaaawww thank you so much dongsaeng-ah :'D
this seriously cheered me up!

anyhoo...okay,
when i read the first half of this, i was like awwwwh jinki why so cute especially this part --> "he had begun feeling that despite dining with Kibum almost every night, he still missed him. He often found his thoughts drifting to the pretty boy during meetings or whenever he was bored."
and then the black mark, gah i seriously didnt have any idea what's going on, and then they love each other so much they're willing to die for each other why cant this happen in real world, i need to find guys like jinki.
and i'm so glad the curse is reversible because if kibum died i'll probably hunt you down dongsaeng. (i wont really though, just kidding XD)
and hyunmin~! even though 2min is my 2nd otp i still cant resist hyunmin's cuteness

i like no, i love!!
you're such a talented dongsaeng XD
and this most definitely makes me feel better! yaaaay~!
love you~! keep writing onkey :P
<33333

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2pmconspiracy April 1 2010, 13:07:13 UTC
unnieeeeee! :D you're very welcome! i'm glad that my fail cheered you up, cause it means it wasn't that failed? hahaha. *dies*

hahaha and unnie, JINKI'S ALWAYS CUTE! ♥ my bias is speaking wayyyy too strongly again xP hahaha but it's true whaaat. *bounces*

yeah they're too awesome together ♥ but yepp, you weren't supposed to understand until jjong stepped out to understand :D hahaha it's the suspense in my story? LOL FAILLLL and yeah we ALL need to find guys like lee jinki and kim kibum in our lives ♥ hee, my onkey bias is speaking too strongly again xD

and yes ikr! :D when i first came up with this idea, i was so freaking depressed. cause i realised that i would have to kill one of them and risk getting MURDERED by my readers D: but then, the idea of a reversible curse suddenly hit me! so here it was :D lol idk what's my pairing for MINJONGMIN. i just wrote the small bit of hyunmin for one of my other unnies, xxqodand thank you unnie! *bows* im really glad i managed to make you feel better! ILY TOO UNNIE! yesh, my new onkey oneshot is ( ... )

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ringdingdong19 April 1 2010, 13:40:40 UTC
ikr >.< i can't pick between jinki or kibum because they're too awesome in their own ways. gahh

yeaaahh~!! new onkey to read! :D i'm happy i can feel the onkey love is slowly coming back XDD
oh, and spot for me yeah! because i'm going camping tomorrow for 3 days... hopefully they'll have signals there so i can still ninja-ed every onkey fic from my phone mwahah >:D
oh i love technology.

ILYT<333

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2pmconspiracy March 27 2010, 13:36:52 UTC
spot for my 3 darling unnies, jelliemonster, mankadi and onkeyloves!

thanks for always supporting my work, unnies! :D love you guys SO FREAKING MUCH! ♥

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jelliemonster March 27 2010, 13:39:16 UTC
SPOT!! I'm first today! hahahaha! ♥

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jelliemonster March 27 2010, 14:29:55 UTC
AHHHH!! See I told you you wouldn't fail! XD

I really like the ending you know. haha~~ Minho wasn't a bad guy after all, and OnKey and HyunMin lives happily ever after. BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! ahhh my biases, okay wait- I'm still not in the right mind XDD

though really-- ONE THING, only ONE THING got me talking to myself in here while reading... WHAT DID CARROTS HAD TO DO WITH ANYTHING FOR JINKI TO GO AND BE ALL MUSHY WITH KIUM?? HAHAHAHAHAHA!! Carrots!! Carrots!! I wanna see a rabbit right now! hahahaha!! CARROTS!!! XDDD okay- I'm quite addicted to the word. hahahaa~~~

and tell me how long is this REALLY LONG writing period you are saying... did it surpass my 2-week record? hahahaha! XDDD

and weeee~~ I can tell your readers will like this XD
love you!! ♥

MOR!! you can't smack my head now! I got first spot. hahahaha!!! XD
*runs away*

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2pmconspiracy April 1 2010, 13:12:06 UTC
hello my slow unnie, who has FINALLY succeeded in getting first on a shared spot, because she was online when i posted this xP

and nooo i still think it's a fail D; and yay im glad you liked it! i thought it was ALOT better than breaking my ultimate OTP :D so yeah, i thought of this during lessons too xP hahaha but yesh, you're always not in the right mind, so im used to it, unnie xD

UNNIE PLEASE DO NOT TELL ME YOU'RE THINKING OF WHAT MOR UNNIE WAS THINKING OF. *flails* the carrot part was just because i thought jinki looked like a rabbit, well actually you were the one who said that xP so i added it in! and lol, you wanna see a rabbit? GO LOOK AT JINKI xDDD

and yeah BARELY ANYTHING can surpass your record unnie, because you are SO FREAKING AWESOMEEEEEEEEE and you know that ♥

and thanks unnie! ILYSM TOOOOOOOOOOOO ♥ miss you btw. D:

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2pmconspiracy March 27 2010, 13:38:15 UTC
spot for my favourite dongsaengie, kunikoi and my two other darling unnies, xxqod and shuuseieki!

love you three too :D hahaha, hope you guys liked this ♥

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shuuseieki March 27 2010, 14:28:17 UTC
Okay. I am just. Completely incoherent right now. I-I don't know what to say anymore. Let me regain my composure a little. I'm kind of totally, absolutely, irrevocably speechless now. Honestly, I have no idea what to say about your writing style anymore, other than the fact that I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I LOVE IT SFM ( ... )

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shuuseieki March 27 2010, 14:43:39 UTC
Oh, and I forgot to mention until after I re-read the fic: I really liked how you went against the norm and wrote Minho as the antagonist. I've never seen Minho in the wrong before, usually he's either Taemin's lover or someone who understands everything that happens in the story and subtly moves the plot. I loved the JongTae in this one ♥

(Also, are the 2 spots for Taemin in Diverse Connection still open? :D Or I can be Minho. I'll leave it up to you to decide who I should be.)

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2pmconspiracy April 3 2010, 02:04:55 UTC
hello unnie! im FINALLYYYY back to leave a proper comment(;

and i made you incoherent again! but like you said, that's a good thing right :D and lol thank you unnie! im really glad and flattered that you love what im writing! ^^ considering that most of them are quite fail-ish to me~ hahaha at least when i compare them to my dongsaeng's fics. crap, i should stop comparing. and and... im ranting again. *waddles away*

and yeah hyunmin's really close to kibum(: they are all REALLY GOOD friends, just like irl ^^ which is why i wrote about them this way :D and yay! this was supposed to be a tear-evoking story, so i guess i succeeded? *claps* oh right *hands tissues* :D ( ... )

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2pmconspiracy April 1 2010, 13:30:29 UTC
hahaha thank you unnie! and nahhh, i fail alot xD procrastinate alot too xP but im REALLY REALLY glad that you liked this! and im happy to know that im improving too ^^

but yeah minho is good eventually! i cant bear to make anyone in SHINee evil, simply becuase they're SO. FREAKING. AWESOME! oh right, i promise to reply to your message (which you sent me so freaking long ago~) tomorrow morning! cause i still have alot of comments to reply now D; and im feeling kinda sleepy. too much math, due to my stupid test today D:

and yeahhh i definetely wont do anything to break onkey! im too biased, you see! :D hahaha and yeah OHMYKEY, THAT'S SO FREAKING COOL! i never thought of it that way xD hahaha dont worry unnie, i like caps spam :DDD

hahaha thank you unnie! new oneshot coming up, once my unnie finishes editing it ^^ hahaha thanks for loving it unnie! LOVE YOU TOO ♥

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volatileflame March 27 2010, 15:15:54 UTC
this was quite intriguing : )

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2pmconspiracy April 1 2010, 13:31:35 UTC
thank you! im glad you liked this :D

thanks for reading! ♥

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