29. summertime

[botherd]

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Nearly there, folks! I have just under seven hours to write 1500 words, so there shouldn't be a problem there unless I let procrastination get the better of me. Writing this part kind of reminded me why I fell in love with the show in the first place.

29. summertime
Naomi.
1893 words

Comments

[canon90]

Wow, I can't believe how emotional this chapter has made me. It's just so sad (yet very real) that they're all going their separate ways. I dread to think what I'm goint to be like when the last ep of series 4 airs...

I am hopeful for Naomi/Emily in the future though, maybe a few years down the line :)

This was just a lovely chapter and you're an amazing writer. Can't believe there's only one chapter left!

[liev]

This was beautiful and upsetting all at once. I know that this is probably very realistic, for a teenage romance to sort of end naturally, but it still breaks my heart (and I still kinda hope that they'll try again once they are a bit more mature and stuff, just because it makes me happy to imagine they could make it work under the right circumstances). I wouldn't say I'm necessarily a romantic, or one to easily buy into this first/true love stuff, but these two do things to me that no other fictional couple ever has.

Nicely played, though. I really enjoyed reading this, and you did an amazing job at keeping it interesting and surprising. I'm very sad it'll end in just a couple of hours.

[lovely_noise]

WHAT. WHY. ARRGGH.

[musicffyou]

Darn it I'm crying in my office because I didn't think this was gonna move me to freaking tears. I really hope my assistant doesn't come in cause that would be awkward.

AMAZING WORK!!! I really hope season 4 can do as good of a job as you did cause this was awesome. I loved how Emily and Naomi left off and the Effy and Naomi friendship is my favorite part. I'm a huge Effy/Naomi shipper so anytime they're together in any form I'm major smiles :D

Excited and kinda sad for the last chapter.
Also what state are you in cause in where I'm at you have a full 11 hours until Midnight?

[botherd]

LOL not in the States, I'm English!

And, thanks so much! ♥

[musicffyou]

I just thought of this and please feel free to shot down this idea but would it be to much to ask to have another everyone chapter after the last Effy chapter?
Kind of like an epilogue. Maybe it could have them meeting up together on the beach at the start of next year summer.
Just something short, maybe a couple of 100 words.

Yeah I'm just pulling at strings to not have this story be over :)

[muiriosa]

Is it bad that I don't want them to get back together? The year apart will do them good!

Can't believe you're nearly there, it's been quite the journey and I appreciate you letting us all along for the ride :)