14. destroy everything you touch

[botherd]

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This chapter's given me a LOT of grief, ugh. It's actually one of the first specific scenes I planned out, back in late August when I first got the idea for the fic, but after planning out the whole rest of the story I'm not sure how well it works. I've edited it quite a bit but I'm still not entirely happy with it.

14. destroy

Comments

[botherd]

I think Effy's about as fucked up as they come. Thanks for reading! ♥

[supergoodtimes]

Poor Effy, she leeches on to anyone, just to not be alone and by doing so she becomes more so. SAD!
I completely have a massive girl crush on Katie, though I'm not alone there. I am slightly confused about her kissing Effy back, because there seems to be strong hints of Katie/JJ but then that might be a lost cause and there are these Katie/Effy moments that seem to cross boarders. LOVE this story!

[botherd]

Thank you so much! The Katie/JJ hints were definitely intentional and haven't been forgotten.

[heart1e55m00mba]

Katie shoves Effy off her, surprisingly strong

Of course Katie's strong, she's a Fitch. You write Effy really well. I enjoyed this chapter a lot.

[botherd]

Thanks! ♥

[musicffyou]

I don't think Effy's that fucked up but right now she's really desperate and hurt. She doesn't know how to apologies or do anything without having a sexual aspect to it, hence kissing Katie and Emily to say sorry.

This was an amazing chapter and your Effy voice is great. I could imagine something just like this happening next season....except I'm pretty sure that Naomi wouldn't hesitant :)

I can't wait for the next chapter.

[botherd]

Thank you! I think is one of the characters whose voice I struggle with the most, so I'm glad you liked it here.

[botherd]

Dude, it always makes me so retardedly happy when you like my stuff. Thank you!! ♥

(LOL IRONY OF TYPOING 'RETARDEDLY')