4. girl overboard

[botherd]

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I'm not quite sure about this part; Pandora is really hard to write. Also, this was going to be longer but I've decided to split it, so the second half of this (from a different character's PoV) will be up tomorrow.

4. girl overboard
Pandora.
1106 words

Comments

[botherd]

Dude, this makes me SO HAPPY. Thank you! ♥

[smeetie]

I actually haven't read many people doing Panda (OK - unintentionally dirty there), but I think you capture her quite well.

"Ho's before bros" - just a whizzer line!

[botherd]

Thanks! ♥ (I don't think I can take credit for "hos before bros" because I'm sure I stole it from somewhere, lol.)

[botherd]

Oh wow, thank you! I really glad you thought she worked. ♥

[canon90]

Pretty sure this is the first fic I've ever read from a Panda PoV, and I actually really enjoyed it!

Pandora may be really hard to write, but I thought you got her characterisation spot on.

[botherd]

Thank you! It was kind of daunting to write her, but I guess it paid off. :D

[supergoodtimes]

This is the best Pandora ever.
She's so under-looked or avoided as a character because people think she's either too ridiculous or too hard to write. The balance of her common sense and innocence (or lack of) is so perfect here.
LOL at Emily and Naomi getting all close at a random party.

[botherd]

Thank you! I agree, she's definitely under-looked in fic, but I'm glad you liked her here.