Five-Hole (Evgeni Nabokov / Douglas Murray)

[sherlockelly]

Title: Five-Hole (Part 2)
Author: revuko & sherlockelly
Pairing: Evgeni Nabokov/Douglas Murray
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Real people, fake story.
Summary: Coach is getting tired of the five-hole slip-ups from his goaltender.
Author's Note: This is smut. This is the smuttiest smut that ever was smut.

Part One

Comments

[revuko]

If I do say so myself, this was damn hot. Melted my face when we wrote it, and then some.
Pat yourself on the back, lady. You deserved it.

~*~*~*~ ATTENTION~*~*~*~

NO MORE VANILLAS. WE WANT REVIEWS.

Yay! I hope this gets the attention it deserves!

But! Now my birthday is in 2 days D: not 4! What the hell? When did that happen!

Oh well. This is so damn amazing. *off to read it again*

[sherlockelly]

That'll teach me to copy and paste! haha! Fixed!

[sherlockelly]

I can't wait to make Charlie read it! HAHAHA!

[revuko]

AHAHAHAHAHAHA THAT'S SO GREAT!!!
He's going to love it, or explode.

Tell me what he thinks when he finally reads it! I really can't get over how fabulous that is.

[hockeysaurus]

Jesus Hfucking Christ. o___O

Maybe I'll be more coherent tomorrow. But OMG WOW. Cripes. Hot.

[sherlockelly]

EXCELLENT! Incoherency and assertions of hotness, I APPROVE!

That's what we were aiming for!

[hockeysaurus]

Dude, goalies ARE MY WEAKNESS. I just....yeah. *melts*

[revuko]

Oh my god, SAME.
I can't help it.

[x_caligirlx3]

0_o
That. Was...
HOT.
Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I have nothing else to say right now.

[sherlockelly]

Hahaha! That's kinda how I keep about looking at your icon... YUM!!!!

:D

[fairygirl03]

Omg, Evgeni and Doug have to be my new favorite Shakrs!!!!!!!

Soooooo hot. And even cute with all the "baby" *giggles*

This was amazing!!! You two did an amazing job.

... and now I want more porn

[revuko]

It's craziness I tell you! So we would write about a page and then switch off, right? I stopped at Todd asking Nabby who he was having sex with, and then Kelly produced Torrey and Dougie.
I mentioned a week before that the thought of them together crossed my mind, but after this, HOLY CRAP. I kind of really love them together. They're taking over my brainnnnn.

Also! I was hesitant at first to add the "baby," but then I was like, 'screw it. I think it's cute.' Plus I can see Dougie doing it X)

Porn is always good. No need to cross it out ;)

[fairygirl03]

Mine tooooooo. I want more Dougie and Nabby! I think (oh god, I can't believe I'm saying this) I love them more than Nabs and Joe o_O. IT'S ALL YOUR GIRLS FAULT, DAMMIT.

I'm soooooo glad you kept it because as soon as I could function after reading this, I couldn't help but stop "awwing" over it, haha. I'm such a dork, lol.

No seriously, porn makes me soooooooo happy. Like... the last fandom I read, the smut was always boring and just blah and kind of same here but THIS OWNS MY HEART!

...I need to lay off the cofee/soda XD

[revuko]

THAT'S WHY I HAVEN'T BEEN WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER. I am so bad. BUT DOUGIE/NABBY HAS BECOME MY OTP AND IT'S A LITTLE SAD. (if you want more you can always try them out yourself when you actually have time :O omg)

Once I get the next chapter out though I think it'll go back. Because, man oh man, do I have some plans for those two ;) some very nice plans that will make me reconvert. I'm sorry Joe :( *pets him*
I guess it's just the obvious dom/sub thing that's got me all riled up. I don't know, but there is just something about these two that gets me all hot under the collar.

*hugs Dougie* that man is adorably fierce.

THAT'S WHY WE WROTE THIS!!!! Because normal sex gets boring and kinks need to be exploited. PEOPLE NEED TO WRITE MORE KINKS. Kelly and I hope we have inspired some people to venture out of their bubble and write some roleplay, toys, costume fics, whatever!

[offthepost]

I LOVED THIS. i loved loved loved loved loved how murray took care of nabby. especially the shower :) :) :) :) GREAT ending!! ahh everything was great/awesome/long. i loved it :)