(Untitled)

[gothickaoru]

Title: None
Rating: PG-13-ish? (Oh, my, not NC-17?!?)
Team/Paring: San Jose Sharks Evgeni Nabokov/Joe Thornton (Oh, my, not Minnesota? Is she high?)
Note: Okay, I'm bored, Nabbs is one of my guys, and I'm bored. I dont know Joe so well, so maybe he's just wrong and I'm sorry. Maybe tell me what I can do better? AND! the ending is crappy. So I'll redo

Comments

[jess_the1]

I loved it. Joe is such a kid, but thas why I love him.:)

Joe and Nabby+Twister=Win.

[gothickaoru]

In my opinion, any goalie+Twister=sex. Thanks for reading!

[sherlockelly]

LOVE IT!!!

Joe is just a huge goof! And oh, man! Nabby playing dumb at Joe's comment! YAY!

For a pair that isn't your team, this is very excellent!

[gothickaoru]

Hey, thank you! Honeslty, I've got five goalie I call my boys and they're my team. XD, not much of a team, I know, but they work well for me!

[revuko]

One note before I get to the good stuff- in the begining you put 'leavening' when you probably meant 'leaving.' Also, you have 'matt' where it should be 'mat.'

But other than that, this was epicly amazing. I loved it! SO MUCH. I just want to ruffle Joe's hair, he is such a cutie. And I really liked the characterizations! All around good stuff.

Oh and the thought of Joe/Evgeni sex on a Twister mat was really hot. X3

You shall be writing these two again, yes?!

[gothickaoru]

Thanks for reading! And, honestly, it wasn't checked. I was just like, "hey, well, this is fun so if Joe works, I'll re-do it later." So, to answer your question, yes, I'll write them again. Hopefully, with less clothing and more Twister.

[revuko]

SOUNDS LIKE A GREAT PLAN

[anneoftherocks]

I totally agree! XD any goalie + Twister = Sex ♥ lolL!