Comments | 2mins4slashing: Keep Me Close chapter XVII- READ THIS PART SECOND

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Keep Me Close chapter XVII- READ THIS PART SECOND

Mar 12, 2009 17:31

Team: San Jose Sharks
Pairing: Joe Thornton/Evgeni Nabokov
Rating: NC-17 for language, situations, and all around darkness.

Summary: Not all in San Jose is sunny as the path to the Stanley Cup proves to be as difficult as ever; falling in love might be the simplest task on this year’s agenda.

Editor: Sherlockelly
Note: READ THIS PART SECOND. Once ( Read more... )

team: san jose sharks, evgeni nabokov, author: revuko, joe thornton, rating: nc-17

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neekbreek March 13 2009, 01:03:52 UTC

uh
may
zing

as always ♥

An arm tightened around his naked waist and Joe’s soft voice cut through his nightmares. “Tell me what’s wrong.”

omg ♥

the last paragraph is beautiful.

revuko March 13 2009, 01:19:09 UTC

Awww lovebug <3 thank you

I liked that part too. FIX EVGENI NOW, JOE!

gothickaoru March 13 2009, 01:06:33 UTC

Dang! I think that you are awesome. And I think Nabby should have been not hurt/sick when you guys played us guys. I really liked how you discribed the numbness Evgeni was feeling after he and Joe had sex, then after the Stars game.

revuko March 13 2009, 01:22:41 UTC

Yeah, Nabby should never be hurt :( Unfortunately that's the case again right now -_-
He needs to stop breaking, but you know that Joe is making him soup (and sexing him up) so he can get better soon.
Haha and the emotions, I had no idea how that was going to turn out, so I'm relieved that you like it!

that_flies March 13 2009, 01:13:58 UTC

NOOOOOO NABBY. ;_;
omg. it'll be okay, joe won't let avery near you.

revuko March 13 2009, 01:24:16 UTC

No he won't! Joe can make everything better

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revuko March 13 2009, 01:50:34 UTC

I'll be waiting ;)

Yay! Have fun in New Jersey!

stayxwithxyou March 13 2009, 01:54:34 UTC

Dammit, I HAVE to sleep so I can't read this as much as I want to, but it'll be the first thing I do in the morning, I just wanted to let you know I'm excited to read it and I'm sure its fantastic as always and expect a super long comment from me tomorrow. ♥

revuko March 13 2009, 02:02:51 UTC

Oh well I can't wait to read it!
The fantasticness is debatable haha, I'll let you tell me if it is or not ;)

revuko March 14 2009, 04:50:32 UTC

Lol will I ever know what you thought of the chapter?

stayxwithxyou March 14 2009, 12:32:16 UTC

Yes darling, sorry. I'm here to report what I thought. Yesterday was crazy hectic.

Okay so on the first part, I loved it and it was complete amazingness as always. I love the way you write [as I'm sure I've told you before], but I absolutely love the imagery and metaphors and everything. It's all so perfect and I just never want the chapters to end.

But anyways there is this one sentence that sticks out for me hardcore.

Because no matter how many minutes the game lasts, the loss is still a loss, and the end of the season is just as heartbreaking.

It's perfect and it's so true. I don't know, I just love it for whatever reason. It just fitsAnd as for the end of the chapter. This was so perfect [fuck my life, I need a new word to describe how awesometastic you are for writing something to amazing], but anyways I love the way Evgeni's emotions are so vivid and this was just so raw and emotional and it actually made me feel like I was feeling what Evgeni was feeling. It made me want to just hug him and never let him go so hopefully ( ... )

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