I have to say, I really really loved this. I skimmed part four earlier and enjoyed the way you wrote these two so I decided to go back and read the entire thing, and I'm so glad I did! This first chapter did not disappoint.
Loved this part: Every little bit I gave, he gave back tenfold, lapping hungrily, coming back to me every time as if to say, "Easy there. No one said it was your turn." It seemed to kind of encompass their entire relationship to me, at least what I've seen in this first part.
Also...I adore Max Talbot. That's probably not cool for a Caps fan to say but I don't care ;)
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Guuuuhhhhh
<3 Brooks so hard.
You are unreal. The good kind.
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Loved this part: Every little bit I gave, he gave back tenfold, lapping hungrily, coming back to me every time as if to say, "Easy there. No one said it was your turn." It seemed to kind of encompass their entire relationship to me, at least what I've seen in this first part.
Also...I adore Max Talbot. That's probably not cool for a Caps fan to say but I don't care ;)
Great job! :D
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