summer don't know me no more.

[jisforjane]

Title: Summer don't know me no more.
Rating; Warnings: NC-17. Sssmmmuuuttt
Pairing: Max Talbot / Petr Sykora
Disclaimer: If this is true...I really don't even think I want a part in it.

Part four of four season themed chapters.
Fall | Winter | Spring | Summer

Comments: Thanks to nofaves , dedicated to more_unknown, finally done. Wooo!

Comments

[more_unknown]

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Yeah, you know how I feel about this. Unreal.

[jisforjane]

I figure you feel "it's about damn time."

I'm so slowwwww.

[jisforjane]

I wish it could go on forever, me torturing these two. But I figure it had to stop somewhere. I'm glad you liked it :)

[nofaves]

I wanted to punch him. I wanted to give myself to him. I didn’t know what I wanted.

OK, I loved that sentiment -- where he feels like a lost boy in search of home. I'm so glad Petr took the time to consider that Max's fear wasn't permanent and let him work through his demons.

Bon travail!

[jisforjane]

You are the only reason this story exists, really. Without you I would have never had the guts to write it. So I am glad you enjoyed it. <3

[jennyagain]

i like that things weren't easy, i like that max got his second chance and took it. i like that the slightly off-balance power dynamics don't preclude there being love here - they fit together, their rough edges match.

such fulfilling resolution; things have come full-circle, just like the seasons. yay!

[jisforjane]

I was trying to make Max less of a douchebag than he normally is. I hope it worked out. I'm glad you liked the resolution...I got worried it was a little camp.

Thanks for the fantastic feedback!

[livinlavidalove]

I really like the way you wrote this series. It has a sorta dark vibe, but it is very appealing.

[jisforjane]

Thanks! I was for certain going for that dark vibe. Glad you liked it!