Keep Me Close- Chapter XV

[revuko]

Team: San Jose Sharks
Pairing: Joe Thornton/Evgeni Nabokov
Rating: PG13, a little mellower than the last one.
Summary: Not all in San Jose is sunny as the path to the Stanley Cup proves to be as difficult as ever; falling in love might be the simplest task on this year’s agenda.

Editor: Sherlockelly

Note: **Make sure you read the last chapter! I

Comments

[stayxwithxyou]

PHEW. I get online and see you've commented me back and then I beg for this chapter only to realize after that you've already posted it. First, I haven't read it yet, I was just so excited and wanted to nab first comment so that my mad long review of it after can proceed the first comment of greatness.

WTF did I just say? Gah. So sleep deprieved. But reading this is so going to be worth it. It's just that amazing. NOW I'm off to read. And I
m hoping someone else didn't nab first comment in my long excessive comment about nothing. Oops. *bes weird*

[stayxwithxyou]

GAH. kasjdfh. YOU. YOU! How could you do that to me? Gah. No freakin' words! This was so much brillance rolled into one chapter. I love the way you write, its so fantastic and I can see everything in my head so perfectly. It makes me feel what Joe and Evgeni are feeling and I love it, I just love it. There aren't words to describe it honestly. I mean, awesome and amazing and fantastic come to mind but that isn't doing it justice! *bes jealous* I wish I could write like that

[revuko]

Haha! I will agree to your last statement. It may be their first kiss (somewhat...) but at least I gave it to you! I was thinking about ending it right before that, and then what would you have? Nothing! >:D

But in your frustration (which is very understandable) I still manage to blush at your words! Me? Writing fantastic?? I would have never thought to live to that day! And brillance sounds so English and that's really awesome too ;)

But yeah... sorry about that still. But the next chapter doesn't end in a cliffhanger! Is that reassuring? And... and... I'm excited to write it which means it will be updated soon, yes? LOL though, 5 am? I'm flattered! But I think it's time for us both to go to bed, and dream of Joe/Evgeni kisses! I will be at least.

Ramblings are good! Keep them up :P

[revuko]

*blushes like crazy*

[sidcrosby87]

Holy Crap. I've been reading your ENTIRE series and I love it! This was soo sad, but soo well written at the same time! Great job and I can't wait for more!

[revuko]

:D thank you! First time reviewers are always great to see!

[revuko]

Haha that's right! The game is actually at 12 for me! Lets hope the Sharks get their act in gear so the game will be possible to watch D: but I'm sorry about your Russian Politics class! What is there to even write about on 20 pages??

Sorry, now I'm rambling! So, um, yes!
So you really knew Avery played a part? Was it a hunch or was I actually able to subtly hint that?? I didn't think I did :/
Haha Marty can beat him up for being an idiot in front of his net some other time, now it's Joe's turn!
He's just a big teddy bear, of course he's caring! But he has a soft spot for his Russian goaltender ;)
But thank god you're beginning to like McLellan. I made him an asshole in the beginning, but after the first week of the season I knew I was screwed when I really liked him! Yaaaay him for coming around

[revuko]

Ouch... and how many pages do you have so far? 10?

You didn't know he was from Khazakstan? Haha, I just go with what Evgeni preferes, considering he said straight out in an interview that he was Russian. Funny interview actually, as most of his are <3

But I'm sorry, those refs were horrible. That was such a frustrating game to watch and UGH. Oh well... I just hope that the Red Wings don't win tonight *knock on wood*

Way to pick up on my lame hints earlier in the story! That's reassuring that I didn't put them in for nothing ;)
Hahaha, fan of sober kisses. Are there many drunk first kisses on 2M4S other than mine?

Oh well, your rambling comments are easy for me to ramble back at you.

[phantom_19]

Wow just wow. Poor Evgeni and stupid Avery. Avery needs to die a slow painful death. I can't wait for the next chapter.

P.S for for the lack of comments on the last few chapters. Half the keys on my laptop are dead and it makes it hard to write any comments. But I took it in today to get it fixed so I'll have it back in a couple of weeks.

[revuko]

I completely understand! I'm sorry that your keyboard hasn't been working :(
But thanks for taking the time to reply! I hope you can get it fixed soon, for your sake as well as mine :)

[abw92]

WoW! This story is amazing! I don't even know what else to say.

[revuko]

Why thank you! I'm glad I am able to please... with depressing stories... :/
Hope to see you next chapter!