Chapter 2

[jisforjane]

Title: Whatever You Say
Pairing: Talbot/Crosby, Talbot's POV
Summary: Talbot is a superstar in his own mind, as always. Crosby has to deal with that.
Rating: PG-13, language
Chapter: 2 out of a few
Disclaimer: All of the events are fake, minus Crosby screaming "MAXIE!" across the ice. That shit happened. It was awesome to watch.
Dedicated to this

Comments

[more_unknown]

Just claiming the first comment to this because I love it. I'm totally into this whole we-have-the-same-brain thing. Or the whole Collective-Gay-Hockey-Sex-Megaconsciousness. . .

[jisforjane]

I am glad you like it. Because, you know, it's written to bribe you.

NHL Slash Convention 2009, WILL I SEE YOU THERE?

[nofaves]

I sat back up, happy to hear that he got a crossbar shot in the game. “Oh, look at that, it’s like reality.”

I could freaking HEAR Max saying that in my head as I read. You nailed him.

I'm really liking this -- keep it up!

[jisforjane]

Hahaha, I'm glad you think I nailed it. Oddly enough my friend pointed out that same line. I guess it was a winner?

[jisforjane]

Thanks so much! I'm glad I could fix your night at least a little. Sorry the election didn't go your way (I voted Barr, I was fucked from the start, so I couldn't be upset either way) and here's hoping Marty heals rapidly.

[agood_badhabit]

God this makes me so mad at Max, but at the same time, you have to love him because that's just who he is.. how frustrating! Poor Sid =( great writing, please post again soon!

[jisforjane]

Gaww, don't be mad at poor Maxie. He's just such a ladies man. Hahaha, I am glad that you like the story thus far. I try to update quickly, so hopefully I'll be back soon with chapter 3.

[ljhockey]

Oh, oh, oh! I love this! Did I remember to comment on the first part? Because I loved it too!

I love the realism here. I see their behavior as so typical male...men who aren't sure of their sexuality. Max is a wonderful character! I love what goes through his head, and you've captured that with just the right amount of narrative in him mind. Just lovely.

And, of course, that whole scene was hot. I could feel the tension between the two, and the progression was delicious.

We need more soon!

[jisforjane]

Thanks! I'm so happy to hear when people think what I write is realistic, because it's basically all that I'm aiming for. Trying to make it at least a little believeable is most of the fun, so I'm glad you are enjoying it.

More soooon, I promise.