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You've Never Let Me Down

Jul 25, 2008 17:14

Title: You've Never Let Me Down
Rating: R
Pairing: Brendan Morrison/Markus Naslund
Disclaimer: Not true as far as I know
Summary: A little ficlette. Letting go is hard.
AN: Making a brief appearance to post after semi-LJ retirement. Dedicated to
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team: vancouver canucks, rating: r, brendan morrison, author: sasha_vic, markus naslund

Comments 16

jadedragon_84 July 25 2008, 23:55:29 UTC

aww that was so bittersweet :( so simple and not overdone.

it makes me so sad that they're both gone.

*hugs* good stuff.

ljhockey July 26 2008, 01:13:24 UTC

Aww...thank you, my loyal reader :)

thought_ribbons July 26 2008, 00:04:04 UTC

Naw! So many heart breaks in free acency now-a-days! This was wonderfully written :)! I really liked it! Oh MO!

ljhockey July 26 2008, 01:13:45 UTC

Thank you so much for the compliments! I'm glad you liked it.

offside July 26 2008, 00:38:22 UTC

Oh, you. Whatever possessed you to think I'd be mad about this?

I admit; I was finally starting to accept the idea that my boys won't be back next year and now it's kind of hit me all over again - maybe it's the kind of day I'm already having as it is, but god. My heart. Is it lame of me to say that I cried? Fuck I'm going to miss my boys, so incredibly much.

I loved this because everything rings so true to me and it makes me sad at the same time, but it's just how I see it.

Because as I much as I want to stay in Vancouver, I don’t want to be here without him. Ever since July 1 hit, I’ve been waiting … praying that somehow, someway, he stays because if not, it’s the beginning of the end.
Oh, my heart. I'd like to see that as the reason he didn't take the 1 yr deal in Van, heh.

I love your characterisation of Mo, a lot and I love that Nazzy is sort of stronger in some ways - for him - and aah, I don't really know how to feedback properly right now because, man. My boys and this, oh. My heart ( ... )

ljhockey July 26 2008, 01:15:30 UTC

Well, I thought you might be mad I stole your boys...your OPT, but this came to me while I was in the shower and by the time I was done it was written in my head. I had to do it!

I'm sorry! I didn't mean to make you cry :( But they'll be together again some day, right?

Awww...thanks for being a friend too! I'm so glad we met! *loves*

bkm5191 July 26 2008, 00:54:33 UTC

I enjoyed this because it didn't feel forced or over written, like people might have been tempted to buy in a few to many losing you metaphors, but it sort of, wears it's sadness on it's sleeve? that is the best way I can think of to describe it.

ljhockey July 26 2008, 01:20:04 UTC

Thanks! I hope that means that you find it refreshingly simple and not errr....dumbed down? Lol!

But seriously, thank you for reading and for the comments :)

bkm5191 July 26 2008, 03:14:35 UTC

yes I do find it simple, and people can think that is an insult, but I like how ti was all laid out and sort of inevitable, but that doesn' mean anyone has to like it, it felt honest.

amyvand25 July 26 2008, 01:38:14 UTC

N'awww...poor boys.

Very sad and very good!

ljhockey July 28 2008, 16:09:36 UTC

Thanks :)