Vacation all I ever wanted (4/4)

[savvyfan]

Title: Vacation all I ever wanted (4/4)
Characters/Pairing: Andrew Ference; Krista Ference; Shawn Thornton; Chuck Kobasew; Milan Lucic/David Krejci
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Conclusion of a four-part series. During a lakeside vacation, Lucic wants to surrender his virginity; Krejci wants to take it. 
Disclaimer: A totally untrue story; pure fiction.

Comments

[savvyfan]

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it. :-)

Hopefully Lucic and Krejci will provide me with some more inspiration this season. I really like them together.

[kaatiya]

Awww. Very cute and sweet. I like the hopeful ending.

[savvyfan]

Thank you! Sometimes these guys are just too cute for their own good, y'know? ;-)

[giallo_girl05]

"Really?" Lucic was surprised. "You - you want me to move in with you?"

Awww!! That line is toooo cute!!
Great ending to a great series :)

[savvyfan]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I'm glad you liked that line, because for David, asking someone to move in is a huge step; the way I've written his character over previous stories, he's a guy who really values his privacy and has never made it a habit to sleep (meaning sleep in the literal term) with anyone. But Milan really made him open up. I love Milan. :-)

[giallo_girl05]

Ahh.. I guess Milan can do that ;)
The way you write him is exactly how I picture his personality.. which is pretty amazing! And with such an adorable personality, who can keep anything hidden?!
I really hope you write more with the two of them :)

[savvyfan]

Thanks, and yeah, I will. :-)

[kelles]

Cute and sexy. I loved the smut and the ending was just too adorable ♥

[savvyfan]

Thanks - I try to make the smut as smutty as possible. LOL. The ending sort of caught me by surprise, but I couldn't resist keeping these guys together. They deserve each other. :-)

[jennyagain]

i love how you clue us in to what shawn had overseen in the last part, the questions asked and answered between krejci and lucic. again, go you with the storytelling! also, there are serious sparks between these two. first-times are a favorite thing of mine, so we've got that to start, but these two are almost unbearably sweet together - not to mention hot. i love how they're all blush-y and "just want it to be good for you"-y. ;D they'll take good care of each other, i have no doubt. i love how once milan makes up his mind to go for this, whoa nellie, ain't no holdin' back that kid. krejci comparing him to chara and then deciding on "the asylum" is awesome. ;D you keep these two gorgeous, you hear? eee.

[savvyfan]

They are certainly gorgeous, no help from me! ;-)

Funny how they evolved as a pair; they do seem so RIGHT (yet so odd) as a pair, their chemistry works so well, yet I never planned for them to be together. I had simply pictured Milan as a perfect foil for Thornton (in "Revelations")in that he (Milan), unlike Chara and Sturm, doesn't have that sense of authority or experience. He's apparently the stereotypical hockey player (big, brawny fighter), someone Shawn can identify with, and he ends up turning everything upside down for Shawn with his attitude.

That provided the germination for his relationship with Krejci, which solved a problem regarding David as well - I realized I really wanted him to be with someone; he needed it. Even though he didn't realize it himself. It's like he had something missing from his life, and didn't realize that it was missing until he found it.

(BTW, in RL, Milan does live in the North End, but his roommate is Mark Stuart. I find that fairly amusing. ;-) )