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Revelations

Apr 24, 2008 02:32

Title: Revelations
Characters/Pairing: Marc Savard/Vladimir Sobotka; Zdeno Chara, Marco Sturm, Shawn Thornton, Milan Lucic
Time: April 2008
Rating: PG-13 for language
Summary: Sobotka and Savard get frisky; Thornton gets crazy; Chara gets pissed; Sturm gets philosophical; and Lucic gets right to the point
Disclaimer: Total fiction, of course

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team: boston bruins, marc savard, vladimir sobotka, zdeno chara, shawn thornton, marco sturm, author: savvyfan

Comments 9

lykophile April 24 2008, 12:36:06 UTC

I love this! Thanks so much. It's great to address prejudice.

fic_of_elise April 24 2008, 18:24:34 UTC

Oh... i am so excited for the next installment. Well done!

savvyfan April 25 2008, 05:32:59 UTC

Thanks so much! I do hope nobody thinks Shawn is a bad guy, because he isn't, really. He's just suddenly found his world turned upside down and doesn't have any idea how to cope.

fic_of_elise April 25 2008, 14:45:20 UTC

he's ignorant, not a hater. There's a difference. I do want to see his ignorance torn down though. I really like the idea of breaking down barriers like that.

so yeah... more? like... by the time i get out of work today? *puppy eyes*

savvyfan April 25 2008, 16:53:14 UTC

Oh dear! Now there's a challenge! ;-)

More to come, I promise, but at the moment, Vladimir and Marc seem to be begging for my attention. I think Shawn's going to have to stew (so to speak) a bit more for now. ;-)

fic_of_elise April 25 2008, 20:16:55 UTC

I understand, i understand! We do as the muses tell us to, not the other way around.

abw92 April 26 2008, 15:11:55 UTC

Loved this one.

jennyagain November 9 2008, 22:09:27 UTC

i think my favorite part of this is lucic's tootsie pop - your descriptions of it are so great i may need to go and get one for myself. ;D

i do love poor shawn, since the rug has been pulled out from under him. chara taking charge of the situation - "you didn't see anything, got it?" - is awesome, as is sturm coming through as the voice of reason. shawn all discombobulated is particularly great against the background of everyone else being so cool, and, of course, savvy & sobotka kissing in the shadows at the garden? YESPLZ.

whee!

savvyfan November 10 2008, 15:08:40 UTC

LOL on the tootsie pop - for some reason I pictured it as orange, with Milan's tongue and lips that color. A little kid speaking wise words. ;-)

I love Chara too in this instance, so intimidating and frightening yet so In Control. I have a feeling if he ever REALLY lost it, the result would be truly terrifying.