fic: benefit package 1/1

Aug 27, 2007 12:08

TITLE: Benefit Package
AUTHOR: Frala
E-MAIL: frala at hotmail dot com
DISTRIBUTION: Just at Perchance to Dream
DISCLAIMER: I neither claim any ownership to any of the characters aside from the ones I made up. And I'm not implying anything about any of the characters in real life. Its all fiction, none of it actually happened, I made it up.
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kevin bieksa, team: vancouver canucks, team: ottawa senators, rating: nc-17, author: frala, ray emery

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mformilly August 27 2007, 18:31:33 UTC
It is a sin to love this fic so much but damn, I can't lie, I do and the mental image of them together is just.... UGH. You know the whole water dripping down a muscled body kinda thing? Times two. And I'm dead.

Thanks for writing it. :)

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frala August 27 2007, 18:42:49 UTC
times two *smishes you* oh you're sooooo welcome! thanks for fb!

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abby20 August 27 2007, 19:28:03 UTC
The water's back on and I'm slowly sliding down to my knees for him, kissing over his stomach and chest and hips, and holy fuck he's hot.

I might have actually SAID "dude, so are you!" to the fic. Ahem.

I know he'll get me off too, and I know it'll be amazing, and I know this summer is far from over, but all I can focus on right now is the way he's touching me, and kissing me, and the soft way he whispers the word 'stay' like he though that I'd be leaving if he didn't.

Oh, I love that, and his line about not being able to explain that there's being into it and being into it, but loving that Ray's the latter, and woo I'm incoherent but this pairing is so unexpected (for me) but so hot. Awesome as ever, Frala. :)

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frala August 27 2007, 19:33:24 UTC
*giggles* it's appropriate though! mmm

ahh thank you!!! hee it was unexpected for me too but yay for hamilton, haha, or something ;) thank you abby :D

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offside August 27 2007, 23:19:24 UTC
I haven't read this yet (probably not a good idea to at school, + work soon) but YAY I have something to look forward to when I get home. I can't wait to read this.

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frala August 27 2007, 23:35:08 UTC
heeee! probably not and I hope you likes!

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nefarious1729 August 28 2007, 01:35:06 UTC
sometimes a pairing actually makes me go, 'WTF?!' this one totally made me do that. and I was pleasantly surprised that I loved it. I love Kevin but Im just not a fan of Ray Emery.

I really liked how easy and flowing and kind of stream of consciousness that Kevin's voice was. everything seemed cool and laid back, exactly how I picture both of their personalities. I loved this a lot.

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frala August 28 2007, 04:03:12 UTC
LOL! yes so random! picked cause they're both yum and from the same town ;p but thanks for reading it and im really glad that you enjoyed it!

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offside August 28 2007, 16:25:00 UTC
Mm, GUH. This is just guh. Exactly what I needed to wake up in the morning. Absolutely lovely, and delicious ♥

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frala August 28 2007, 17:39:02 UTC
hee thank you :D im glad

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