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2minbiased

Childhood friends, Never forgotten. [Twoshot]

Apr 28, 2012 19:33

Title: Childhood friends, Never forgotten. [Twoshot]
Genre: Angst-ish, high school AU
Rating: PG13 -swearing

Summary: Drifted apart, lost in a world of grey. Minho doesn't know how.

( His hair was dyed an intoxicating shade of copper, bright and gleaming in the summer sun that streamed in through the windows. )

shinee, 2min

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2minbiased April 28 2012, 23:07:35 UTC

awk really? ^__^
I might, if I ever finish my other chaptered fic, but if I do I'll notify you in some way :D
thanks for commenting!

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2minbiased April 28 2012, 23:50:03 UTC

xtrcghijpufyv you're so sweet :3
I might actually, I've got a load of little lines and scenes I've been wanting to use but haven't had the chance to. I'll notify you if I ever do!
thank you for commenting <3

honestfrank April 29 2012, 01:55:51 UTC

Lee Taemin was smart, a dancer, fluidity in every movement that he made, whilst Minho was tanned from the hours of playing football outside, unruly wavy hair caught up in a sloppy ponytail, just another one of those jockeys that was on the school team with long limbs that held the instinct to run. Can we talk about this, please? They way you used words here was so fine, like lacing together scraps of sun with spider silk. I adore your Minho and your Taemin, and while I want to ask for a sequel I kind of don't want you to write one because the length of this was so beyond perfect for everything that I don't want it to be changed.

I love this and I love you and I love 2min, and if you don't mind I'm going to add you as a friend so I don't miss anything else you write.

2minbiased April 29 2012, 02:16:42 UTC

omg you ;___; I didn't even know how to phrase that sentence the way I wanted it to sound
we can talk about anything you want :3
I'm working on the sequel right now but omg i don't want to ruin it now that you've commented on it.

Add away ;~~; I was going to add you like ages ago but I didn't want to seem like a creep rydtguio

honestfrank April 29 2012, 04:01:46 UTC

It sounds perfect, I'm so happy it is like it is. <3 And if it feels like it works then forevermore, write it! You've got an open ending that's excellent for making more words, and I'm sure you can pull it off.

You have no idea what you've gotten yourself into, telling me we can talk about anything we want and adding me in one night...

We can start with Minho's sexy lip biting. Then we can move on to Minho biting Taemin's lip. And then...gyahahaaa

2minbiased April 29 2012, 12:56:34 UTC

Hey hey, you're the one who finally started it by commenting here. ANYTHING. and I mean anything ;)

I like how you think...Taemin and his blowjob lips

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darkangel265 April 29 2012, 02:22:45 UTC

way to go Minho!! SEQUEL PLEASE!!!
(or ill call those three guys again..mwahahaha...lol)

2minbiased April 29 2012, 12:57:29 UTC

evil evil evil! you can't cos I didn't include the names ;)
thank you for commenting! <3

princessliette April 29 2012, 13:14:59 UTC

it's so simple yet so deep >___< <3 this is really like the reality. The very possible thing Taemin could do is to forgive Minho after a long time they drifted apart. Not to mention Minho really meant with his word <3

if i were Taemin, i'd do that also <3

2minbiased April 29 2012, 13:58:40 UTC

aww thank you!
Exactly, brcause I'm sure that most people have lost a friend that they had when they were little, and I was just trying to interweave that wanting to be friends again?
thank you for commenting, I actually never thought of Taemin having to forgive Minho, but it is a relevant point that I'll try to include in the sequel