Resistance (13b /?)

[2headed_turtles]

 

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[wkgreen]

I loved John's oh crap moment when he realized he might have made a bigger mess. :)

Lauren rocks!

Love protective Cameron. :)

Waiting, mostly patiently, for the next chapter! :)

[2headed_turtles]

*G* We'll have to wait and see... John might get a bigger "oh crap" moment in the future.

Lauren is lots of fun, I like playing her off John, she's not in awe of his "future leader of mankind" thing.

Next chapter is fighting for time with my episode of the SCC virtual season, but hopefully it won't be too long.

[stinker_1]

1. I would just like to point out that my heart did a little happy dance when I realized there was an update..

2. Damn you for making that update so good cause my heart sank once I realized that I had read the whole damn thing and now I have to wait for an update.

3. Fan-freakin-tastic! More please and thank you!

[auriflamme]

Pretty much agree with all three points.

[2headed_turtles]

Thank ye,
I feel the same way about my favorite fics.

[2headed_turtles]

Always a good sign when people want more *G*. Hopefully i won;t have to make you all wait too long for the next one.

[skippr]

Ooh. My. Gawd! That was such an amazingly epic update, I'm pretty sure my heart fluttered when I saw this chapter posted. It was seriously so good..better than this chocolate cake my mum made, and that's saying something lol. I like how you haven't rushed anything between cam and Sarah, but hey they are both currently in the same hotel room..alone hehe. Stoked for the next update!!

[2headed_turtles]

You know you're doing something right when people are getting heart palpitations *L*.
Better than chocolate cake? Seriously? Whoa.

I'm sure poor Sarah feels rushed *G*, but yeah, trying to take the time to set this up right with them. It's a tricky dynamic, and sometimes they just take over a scene and do what they like with it. Should be some solid progress on the way soon though *G*.

[chgoofy]

You were right, Bones, tonight was indeed my lucky night with part 13 posted. Fantastic chapter. I loved the bathroom scene and couldn't helping but lol at the following line: " So much for age and gender… when they got back, she owed John one hell of a fucking apology". Truly amazing!

[2headed_turtles]

Thank ye,
*L* I felt Sarah had to acknowledge that at some point, John got pretty maligned in those first few chapters.

[fig_aruna]

Omigodmigodomigodomigadmoigadomigaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadssssssssssssss!!!!11!!!!!!eeeesssssss

I AM DEAD.

DEAD FROM AWESOME.

A POSSIBLY DANGEROUS, MAYBE EVEN ILLEGAL AMOUNT OF AWESOME

MUST RE-READ. BE BACK WHEN A LITTLE LESS...WELL. THIS.

YOU ARE KILLER.

AFAFGAAUFSJFAJJGSFAFAFAFAFADHKRQFWJTARUSJ

[fig_aruna]

I've just reread this chapter for like the sixth time, and I just can't stop exploding at the end. This makes coherent commenting embarrassingly difficult...! ;_;

Bullet points might be the best I can manage at the moment:

- Riley and Lauren = 3D characters = RAWK.

- John = thoughtful son = RAWK.

- Charley invoking even more Cameron!ImaKillUness than Riley did despite him only being in the picture for less than an afternoon vs. Riley's ~one year = OMG SO AMAZING.

- Sarah + Cameron = ... PRICELESS BEYOND WORDS.

Like I said, YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE. AND IT IS A WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL DEATH. GUH.

[2headed_turtles]

*L* I never have to wonder if you approve...
Loved this Cameron!ImaKillUness sums it up nicely *G*. And yeah, good old human-type possessiveness is ramping things up a bit... Poor Charley just has no idea.